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A horses comparison

A horses comparison

A horse 12 hands tallĀ 
Chestnut, oak coat of hairĀ 
Flowing main the wind does stirĀ 

Galloping wild and freeĀ 
On the sandsĀ 
Across the sea
Valleys tooĀ 
Fresh green pastures newĀ 
Passing under waterfallsĀ 
Listening to the others callĀ 
Never shall this horse fallĀ 

He’s free as a bird
Like the bird needs the airĀ 
A horse doesn’t need a rider to rideĀ 
He has his own mindĀ 
he just wants to gallopĀ 
or maybe canterĀ 
frolic in the morning sun
run as far as can be done
just wants to have some fun Ā 
Ā 

A horse 12 hands tallĀ 
Born to raceĀ 
From open eyeĀ 
Trained to be the best he canĀ 
But not of horseĀ 
Instead of manĀ 
A thorough bredĀ 
Built so strong
His legs built perfect Ā  Ā 
It won’t be longĀ 

Racing down the emerald trackĀ 
Being whippedĀ 
By its rider on its back
Stirrups dug into its sidesĀ 
Across the grassĀ 
It hooves shall glideĀ 

Hedges highĀ 
Too high to jumpĀ 
Horses land with a thumpĀ 
Jockeys land with a bumpĀ 
Legs are brokenĀ 
Bones are shatteredĀ 
But what’s it matterĀ 
You got your money after your flutterĀ 
And the jockeys fine it’s no big dealĀ 
But can you hear that horse’s squealĀ 
It’s bones won’t healĀ 
Its reward for trying its best
Will be a single bullet to the headĀ 
For running that fieldĀ 
Its reward is deathĀ 

A horse 12 hands highĀ 
Built so strongĀ 
To pull your rideĀ 
to pull a plough through muddy fieldsĀ 
what’s the deal?

This majestic beast that stands so tallĀ 
Seems to have no choice at allĀ 
Do you think that’s really Ā fair?Ā 
Do you even really care?

Horses have been used through centuries oldĀ 
They have pulled the cannons in past wars old Ā 
Pulled the barges up the canalsĀ 
Started young as little foalsĀ 
To do your workload and achieve your goals
Some are worked till frail and oldĀ 
Then at the end when of new more useĀ 
are purely sold
made into glue and tins of dog foodĀ 

Some have battle scarsĀ 
Where their master charged the fieldsĀ 
The horse itselfĀ 
Felt cold steelĀ 
What’s the big deal?
Well it kind of feels Ā 
It felt the blade enter its skinĀ 
It sees the scar left fromĀ 
Closed skinĀ 

But do they have a choice?Ā 
Do we hear their voice?Ā 
And If we did
Ā what would it say?
Would it say ride me hardĀ 
Ride me quickĀ 
Whip me with your crop stickĀ 
Thank you for teaching me tricksĀ 

Would it say, make me jumpĀ 
Higher than I thought possibleĀ 
Would it say I am adaptableĀ 
Would it say put a bit in my mouthĀ 
So with your reins you can pull my mouthĀ 

Or would it sayĀ 
Leave me aloneĀ 
Let me roam in pastures greenĀ 
Wild and freeĀ 
To live my life
with my familyĀ 

maybe all the above is wrongĀ 
who am I to right a wrongĀ 
but when we hear a poem aboutĀ 
a horseĀ 
is it about it being worked till deathĀ 
or being used as transportationĀ 
or recreation?Ā 
no, well not what I’ve heardĀ 
they are about riding freeĀ 
being one with natureĀ 
not a photo or featureĀ 
they don’t need a master or teacher
they are a majestic creature.
Ā 

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J A Overton

Lol lisa have you really read this poem lol its nothing like little house on the prairie lol the picture may depict it but it isnt. thats why i dont think you have read it. i honestly read yours from start to finish.Ā 

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J A Overton

lol it's ok. no apology needed,Ā it's called skimming where you read but don't actually take in what you read. i don't do that i like to absorb what i read and immerse myself in the story the poem is trying to depictĀ lolĀ 

.Ā 

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Christopher Correia

great read, Jeff, insightfulĀ view on how one of the most majestic animals of all time has been used or 'used' up by man throughout time for vice, war, transportation, food and much more.... they are versatile valuable animals no doubt and we sometimes see Napoleon on the horse, but not the scares of war you speak about....Ā modern man has caused the near extinction of many animals on this planet, the North American Buffalo, and elephants of Africa comes to mind right away, and in Trinidad, the monkey and certain wild game are almost gone....the plight and grace of wild horses have been written about by great poets such as Cherie and others and we know in part it is an excellent idea to show the perspective you took, as well... education on a topic is always a good place to start conversations, a terrific poem, my friend, unusual, but relevant....good to shine the spotlight on dark things with such excellent articulation and passion,Ā be well....tributeĀ 

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J A Overton

Hi Chris, thank you for the fantastic comment this is why i like to read your reviews, you delivered as always thank youĀ 

cheers jeff

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