A horses comparison

A horse 12 hands tallĀ
Chestnut, oak coat of hairĀ
Flowing main the wind does stirĀ
Galloping wild and freeĀ
On the sandsĀ
Across the sea
Valleys tooĀ
Fresh green pastures newĀ
Passing under waterfallsĀ
Listening to the others callĀ
Never shall this horse fallĀ
Heās free as a bird
Like the bird needs the airĀ
A horse doesnāt need a rider to rideĀ
He has his own mindĀ
he just wants to gallopĀ
or maybe canterĀ
frolic in the morning sun
run as far as can be done
just wants to have some fun Ā
Ā
A horse 12 hands tallĀ
Born to raceĀ
From open eyeĀ
Trained to be the best he canĀ
But not of horseĀ
Instead of manĀ
A thorough bredĀ
Built so strong
His legs built perfect Ā Ā
It wonāt be longĀ
Racing down the emerald trackĀ
Being whippedĀ
By its rider on its back
Stirrups dug into its sidesĀ
Across the grassĀ
It hooves shall glideĀ
Hedges highĀ
Too high to jumpĀ
Horses land with a thumpĀ
Jockeys land with a bumpĀ
Legs are brokenĀ
Bones are shatteredĀ
But whatās it matterĀ
You got your money after your flutterĀ
And the jockeys fine itās no big dealĀ
But can you hear that horseās squealĀ
Itās bones wonāt healĀ
Its reward for trying its best
Will be a single bullet to the headĀ
For running that fieldĀ
Its reward is deathĀ
A horse 12 hands highĀ
Built so strongĀ
To pull your rideĀ
to pull a plough through muddy fieldsĀ
whatās the deal?
This majestic beast that stands so tallĀ
Seems to have no choice at allĀ
Do you think thatās really Ā fair?Ā
Do you even really care?
Horses have been used through centuries oldĀ
They have pulled the cannons in past wars old Ā
Pulled the barges up the canalsĀ
Started young as little foalsĀ
To do your workload and achieve your goals
Some are worked till frail and oldĀ
Then at the end when of new more useĀ
are purely sold
made into glue and tins of dog foodĀ
Some have battle scarsĀ
Where their master charged the fieldsĀ
The horse itselfĀ
Felt cold steelĀ
Whatās the big deal?
Well it kind of feels Ā
It felt the blade enter its skinĀ
It sees the scar left fromĀ
Closed skinĀ
But do they have a choice?Ā
Do we hear their voice?Ā
And If we did
Ā what would it say?
Would it say ride me hardĀ
Ride me quickĀ
Whip me with your crop stickĀ
Thank you for teaching me tricksĀ
Would it say, make me jumpĀ
Higher than I thought possibleĀ
Would it say I am adaptableĀ
Would it say put a bit in my mouthĀ
So with your reins you can pull my mouthĀ
Or would it sayĀ
Leave me aloneĀ
Let me roam in pastures greenĀ
Wild and freeĀ
To live my life
with my familyĀ
maybe all the above is wrongĀ
who am I to right a wrongĀ
but when we hear a poem aboutĀ
a horseĀ
is it about it being worked till deathĀ
or being used as transportationĀ
or recreation?Ā
no, well not what Iāve heardĀ
they are about riding freeĀ
being one with natureĀ
not a photo or featureĀ
they donāt need a master or teacher
they are a majestic creature.
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Comments
I love it. reminds me of the tv show little house on the prairie.
the picture or the poemĀ
both
Lol lisa have you really read this poem lol its nothing like little house on the prairie lol the picture may depict it but it isnt. thats why i dont think you have read it. i honestly read yours from start to finish.Ā
I sometimes read things too fast for my own good, I apologize. ItĀ has old feel to the read and I do like the picture. I love horses and all they represent. they are workers and best friends.
lol it's ok. no apology needed,Ā it's called skimming where you read but don't actually take in what you read. i don't do that i like to absorb what i read and immerse myself in the story the poem is trying to depictĀ lolĀ
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of course I need to apologize. I really do love your work.
great read, Jeff, insightfulĀ view on how one of the most majestic animals of all time has been used or 'used' up by man throughout time for vice, war, transportation, food and much more.... they are versatile valuable animals no doubt and we sometimes see Napoleon on the horse, but not the scares of war you speak about....Ā modern man has caused the near extinction of many animals on this planet, the North American Buffalo, and elephants of Africa comes to mind right away, and in Trinidad, the monkey and certain wild game are almost gone....the plight and grace of wild horses have been written about by great poets such as Cherie and others and we know in part it is an excellent idea to show the perspective you took, as well... education on a topic is always a good place to start conversations, a terrific poem, my friend, unusual, but relevant....good to shine the spotlight on dark things with such excellent articulation and passion,Ā be well....tributeĀ
Hi Chris, thank you for the fantastic comment this is why i like to read your reviews, you delivered as always thank youĀ
cheers jeff