Poem -
A life forgotten
I just want to die.
I could care less how many tears you cry.
I want to take my life.
"God save me", will be the last thing on my mind.
I thought I was okay.
I thought I had this beat.
Sadly you could never tame this beast.
Every tear I shed.
Anyone could have cared less.
No one cares about this life.
No one cares about how hard you try.
I'll take a bullet.
I'll take a blade.
I wish just once I could feel safe.
This life it hurts.
It will never be okay.
The last thing I'll remember?
The look on your face....
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Hello Crystal...
I am not sure if you heard of the bus accident on Monday in Tennessee...
There were previous complaints about the driver...
He crashed a couple of months before this...
The first accident he didn't have children on the bus...
He ended up killing 6 children from 5 -11 years old...
Some siblings did survive...
Funerals being held this weekend for the children...
I am sure any one of those didn't want to die...
There's no cure for suicide or murder...
I am sorry that you and many struggle with not wanting to live...
Things really don't make sense at all...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I did not hear of that. That's absolutely terrible... This poem was written in July or august I believe though. I don't ways tend to share my poetry, but it's really there for people to know that they aren't alone when dark times seem to be around. Thank you for sharing. next time I get severely depressed I will think of your words.
I respect your straight talk.
Could read you poems all night.
the depth and rhyme scheme is always on point.
Could read 'your' poems all night
Thank you very much!