A line on the horizon 💙
Oh lonesome sailor
e’er seafaring the salty sea
Escaping man-made’s earthly wonders
Does oblivion strike thee ?
Caring nothing but your anchorage
to steadfast you where you will
Listening to Mother nature
with the seagulls shrieking shrill
Staring endlessly to the motion of a swirling infinite surf
Swelling and calming with it’s elements of worth
An eternal unfathomable, measureless view
Surrendering your submission
to God’s oceanic blue
A line on the horizon,
A subtle comparison to spy
Briney, blues of rippled liquid
satin shaded from the sky
Ne’er troubled by timelessness
Clock’s hands shan’t concern you
Amidst the mighty marine monotony
Betwixt the turquoise, silvery hue
I bow down to your reverence
Oh how I envy thee
Thy solitude, lonesome sea captain
With your mindset so free
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Beautiful!....................................................lad
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So much beautiful imagery throughout this piece. But these two lines really soaked up my imagination. Stunning Jill. Oh the natural navigation of the ocean perfectly described. Gorgeous write ✨👏🌻x
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What a pleasure reading your VERY crafted 'wordplay' here......the words so carefully chosen creating finely fashioned phrasing that shines!!.......ALL STARS!!........Enjoyed!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo : )
Awww Thanking you kind Sir Tony 💙⭐️💙
What a beauty of a write Jill...one of your best girl..pinned 💕
Awww wowsas Thanks Chickadee 💕💕💕😍🥰❤️
Jill a great nautical write that takes any reader on a great sea adventure.
And just what the poetry doctor ordered a poem of calm to calm the soul.
Full honours to you for writing an engaging piece and I tip my poetry hat to your good self and your unique imagination.
Great to read and reread your soothing journey of a poem.
I wish you well and thanks for sharing my poetic friend.❤️
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Jill five stars is giving me gyp but will try again tomorrow and I forgot to say I also love your poem's title.❤️
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wow wow wow!!!!!
what poem so
great so wonderful
wow!!!!!
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