~ A Love So Far Away ~
Will you greet me in the starry field
Of my love's intent
Or feel the fray of my happiness
When considering so far away
Making me jealous of time spent
In your otherworldliness
Making me screamΒ Β
Into the complete quietness
Of my longing for you....
Your waves breaking gently
On the shores of my imagination
Where I spy you swimming
Through the heart of my anticipation
Like a magnet of exuberance
Where my energy
Finds its way through
To the heart of you
As your completed wishes for me
Take hold of my hopes and dreams...
They dangle upon drops of dew
Representing morning's promise
And the idea
That true love from afar
Can flourish,
And lay a soft foundation
For kisses
That land upon lips,
Of a love
So far away....
Tony Taylor
* for GΒ Β
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Thanx for reading Miss JAYJAY!!.......smiles.....T xoΒ : )
Tony you are so very gifted with the love inks well done
Thank you Miss DARKLY!!....greatly appreciated!!.....smiles....T xoΒ : )
Hello T :)
How your words warm the cockles of my heart. I agree with whatβs been said. You have away with writing about love. It spills and flows with such elegance, that it leaves the reader feeling rather tipsy from the sheer radiance that exudes from every line. You are my sunshine βοΈ π Thank you for being you. For always knowing how to send me warm fuzzies :) xx
NO!!....Thank you for being you!!.....sending lots warm thoughts G!!.....thanx for this!!.......smiles......T xoΒ : )
So far away from me, from me. Has a dire straits tune to it, this poem.
I hope you can get your money for nothing and chicks for free.Β
All respects to the ones we've loved before, they'll travel in and out your door.Β
I'm glad you sing your song, I dedicate some more happiness to the ones who have loved before.Β
VERY cool comment Miss LILIANA!!.....LOVE Dire Straits and Mark Knopfler in general!!.....thanx so much for this my friend!!......smiles....T xoΒ : )
Grew up to these songs of hope when life was dire.Β
Love music in general.Β
Keep singing you have a beautiful voice,as I can almost hear you in my mind.Β
We all have to vent, over time lost or spent.Β
There's more to do, like be wonderful you.Β
" Or feel the fray of my happiness." some great lines throughout this write Tony! awesome!..................................................................................Jim
Thank you JIM!!....that's one of my favorite lines....I appreciate you pointing out!!.....we're on the same wavelength brother!!......smiles.....T xoΒ : )
how well you articulate & express such intensity of feeling Tony T .. N :)
Why Thank you kindly Sir NEVILLE!!......I try brother....I try!!......Big Smiles!!.....T xoΒ ;Β )
Stunning Tony...speaks of a great love and yearning. Two beautiful souls oceans apart. Hugs to you and G x
Thank you ever so much Miss MARION!!....so sorry for the late reply......big smiles!!.......T xoΒ : )