A Murder Of Crows

In the dusty submission of my life's begging remission
My soul, could never find forgiveness
There was a murder of crows, I'm guilty I suppose
Of not doing things in neat little rows
The bullet hit his face, he fell, the crows frightened as well
Left me standing in a pool of bloody hell
And as the murder flew away into this horrible day
He spoke his dying words, " My friend, I am not afraid!"...
For the rest of my life, those words haunted my nights
With the murder of crows, the wingspan of my mind
And the burgeoning recognition, insanity, my predisposition
For the growing taste of blood I became a physician
I danced upon toes, created by a murder of crows
My heart grew as black as liver's blood, when it glows
And though I could not sleep, human organs I did eat
Which allowed me a tortured way to dream
In these dreams I composed, operas, for these tortured souls
Lives I had taken and given, to a puppeteering murder of crows
An indignity I had gained, from a dying man's final refrain
"My friend.." he had gurgled, "I, am not, afraid!"
Tony Taylor
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Hello Tony...
I have never enjoyed the thought ofΒ eating human organs...
You make it seem as an acquired taste...
SCARY!
Visit at their own risk?
Great write!Β
Hugs and Smiles!Β
FeathersΒ
LOL!!!.Thanx SPARROWSONG!!.......an acquired taste indeed (smiles)....... happy to see you on my page FEATHERS!!.......thanx again for this!!.......Β hugs-n-smiles!!.......T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Love the title to this piece Tony. The poem isn't half bad either lol you know I'm teasing...... just so you know I think you're brilliant!
XX Lisa
Cool!! I thought you might like this one....... so VERY pleased to hear it from the best writer of this type subject matter on COSMO!!........ high fives.......thanx for this DARKLY!!......HUGZ!!!.........T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Compelling, tightly constructed with a riveting story at its heart.
Bravo, good sir! Bravo!!
J ;)
Thanx JASON!!... appreciate the positive ink!!......... smiles.......TΒ ?
Brilliant dark, cannibalistic write Tony.....great rhyming also.
Mick.
Thanx SO much MIZZY!!.......appreciate the support..... and the positive ink brother poet..... smiles........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?ββ΄β³
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
I hate to misinterpret your phenomenal prose, so before I endeavor my comments, I must run my take on this by you. Β And I'm probably far off, but is this a soliloquy by the "Marquis De Sade?
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Excellent........all smiles
Thanx LORRIS!!......bigger smiles::!!!!!!!!........t XO.Β ?β³β΄
wow what a poem like it linda i wrote a new one called limits take a look thanks linda