Poem -
A Paralysing Love.
When I lock my eyes with yours
The universe ceases to existÂ
Love and sunshine fill the air outdoorsÂ
Will they ever find love in the mist?
.
Each breath is filled with fire
I hope the fever will not pass
There is nothing parallel to this desire
Yet I fear a kiss incase you shatter like glass
.
I must live with this paralysing terror
Yet each agony is worth the pleasure
This can never be an errorÂ
You're my hearts deepest treasure
.
Each touch is sensually euphoricÂ
Running like electricity trough my skin
This overwhelming love is historicÂ
I pray that once again, Eros shall win
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Comments
Hey W.D.!!......this is such a well considered write.... like you went over each word choice with a magnifying glass...... 'pristine' comes to mind...,,, this kind of writing always stands out because the reader understands the careful approach to assuring that the author wanted their intent fully understood... Love is such a difficult subject to be original with...... your efforts shine here dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?âłâ´ââĽ?
I am flattered my poet friend, and I am very grateful for such beautiful feedback âĽď¸