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A Patchwork of Ashes

image is of rear cover of Cotton Girls and Paper Chains .. thanks for any interest shown N x

A Patchwork of Ashes

A Patchwork of Ashes

Not unlike a patchwork of ashes
there were of course the odd snatches
of light and cool flame, left smouldering ..

Yet embered with a broadening smile
much like a rainbow, but with
the heat of a comet embroidered ..

Far too wild to tame ..

And whilst mirrors are no longer
kind to him, she still
occasionally says that he is beautiful ..

Of course, her love for artist fingers
and for his tongue are but a tribute
and a testimony to years of longing

But yes, still far too wild to tame ..

And rather like refracted light
what you see is not straight forward ..
Nor even, maybe what you get ..

In the end tho’ tis bent and angled
prismed even ..
like the mirrored reflection of a life ..

And then of course, not blameless ..  

Indeed like love, once started
they should not stop but for a moment
at least until both ends are quenched ..

Like light itself, he could not grasp it
and so regardless, when extinguished
She eventually, just had to let the bugga go …

 

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Marion

No time to.digest properly right now...Will be back x

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Marion

Wow...this is such a deep and ...earthy ...write. All the complexities of any given relationship exposed here in fine word choices Neville. Excellent my friend X

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Neville

Bless you my very dear literary friend .. That'll do nicely .. Very nicely indeed :) x

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Being Me

This is excellent Neville. I love the thoughts that this explores 

"And rather like refracted light

what you see is not straight forward ..
Nor even, maybe what you get ..

In the end tho’ tis bent and angled
prismed even ..
like the mirrored reflection of a life .."

We see the same things and yet we don't see in the see way ...no wonder love is tricky!

Awesome writing again x

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Neville

Thank you ever so much Tina .. you are a credit to our species .. and yes, love is tricky my lovely friend xx

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Being Me

You are sooooo welcome. Hugs xx

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Neville

Aaaahh that's better :) 

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