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A path of positivity

A path of positivity

Pummeling precipitation on my wooden window pane waxing and waning in it’s precarious plight now and again . such a thumping thud of thunder, a powerful pound,  piercing my senses with that deafening sound . yet as I listen to the willpower of it’s sheer beckoned bravery, how on earth can one think that something so musically melodious is uncannily unsavoury?

Yes I know heavy rainfall pouring from the sky may cause complications with flooded regions waist high . but natural disasters are Mother nature’s happenstance, her unusual, rare occasional chance of catastrophic circumstance . totally unexpected and out of humanities control thus creating calamities unpredicted to a living soul . tho I understand the capriciousness of the wavering weather, I absolutely love listening to a deluge of downpour with storminess altogether . as long as I am in the comfort of my own homely house sat cozily in contentment within our lounge with my spouse

So whilst Wintertime weaves its wonderments of fickleness fluidity I shall not giveway to groaning at it’s wildness with brutality but I will welcome what lies ahead in the knowledge that Spring shall rear her colourful awakening with the swallows on the wing . just around the corner and beyond a path of positivity there looms the light at the end of the tunnel from the wrath’s of Winter’s negativity . I can wrapup warm with hood on my head with my wellington boots and trudge my tread, through the puddles and passageways on my countryside haunts and embrace the Wintertime’s changes with the withering flaunts

 

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Katina Woodruff...

Wow Jill, you are the queen word smith at Cosmofunnel! I enjoyed reading this poem so much I had to pin it to read again later. I really like your narrative style, your attention paid to the word choices and placement and of course the way each line flows to the next in rhyme. 

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high . but natural disasters are Mother nature’s happenstance, her unusual, rare occasional chance of catastrophic circumstance . totally unexpected and out of humanities control thus creating

Even when a storm is approaching, we can embrace what is good at our finger tips. I like hearing the rain on a tin roof, although our roof has a leak and we have to put a pan on the bed to catch the excess rainfall, sometimes I forget the fact that the roof has a leak and I enjoy the humor of watching the water tricked down into the large sauce pan, on my husband's side of the bed. 

 

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Jill Tait

Awww Thank you so much I’d love to be the ‘Queen wordsmith’ on Cosmofunnel but I have never ever lol won anythng like you my dear Katina so I think it is actually you who should hold that title ❤️❤️❤️

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Cherie Leigh

Hi Jill...I love your positive attitude!  That is the way to approach life...even when it can be so unpredictable and finicky....There is always hope...Great write. xo Love n Hugs 

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Jill Tait

Thanks Cherie my lovely friend you are always so kind to me ❤️❤️❤️

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Jill Tait

Haha Im busy now writing about me & a lol ghost!!!🤣😱

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