Poem -
A Planet's Best
Tale of a lone and dreary world,
Matter around the sun was hurled!
Particles organized; something new!
Planets appearing; spinning true!
Immersed in water; future by fires,
Glistening orb; beauty that inspires!
Surface of nations try to flourish,
If Mother Earth will only nourish!
Clothed with clouds; courting the moon,
The other planets jealous loom!
Then a glory it will receive,
A planet's best it will achieve!
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Comments
Fun😁
Thank You John! Glad you liked it! ........Jim
"Mother Earth will only nourish" if every one cares. Like it!
Thank You Yiyan!
Aww lovely Mother Earth ❤️💙❤️
Thank You Jill!
U very welcome lad xx
Jill, there was a prophet in the Old Testament that was being given an assignment by his leader whom was several hundred years old, and the prophet at the time was ninety years old, and he responded " I am but a lad" I don't remember the specifics right now except for the story. So, I think it is so funny you calling me a lad, and endearing! I am" but a lad". Your friend! .................Jim
Well lad is a northern thing from where I live lol xx
Well I'm a southern Texas dude, but it suits me fine! lol!..........Jim
Opposite ends of the universe x
Just a rock skip across the pond, lol! .Jim
Hop skip n a jump over the ocean
Nice write Jim. The planets fascinate me. I have been watching reruns of The Planets recently with Professor Brian Cox...so, enjoyed your write 😊
I appreciate You Marion!..........Jim
good write Jim enjoyed the read...all smiles
Thank You Lorris!
Thank You Gianfranco!
Cool thoughts in this poem.
Great work.
Thank You for the encouragement!..........Jim
Thank You Ashley!
John so appreciate the support! ...........Jim
Thank You sparrowsong!