Poem -
" A RIPPLE IN TIME.."
A ripple in time,
Brought my love to me,
It sang and jested
As to what may
Or, may not, be....
A cloistered ripple,
Could teach me of Love
In ways, most unexpected,
A Love that could swim
Through time, unprotected....
For, it was in time's measure
Where Love became weightless,
And histories made pleasurable,
With Love's forethought,
And senses, unfathomable....
As though, times fabric
Could somehow provide,
An essence, of Love's kiss,
Where deep down inside
We all own, a measure of this...
A ripple in time,
Brought my Love to me,
It taught, and embraced
Love's endlessly,
Pristine,
Possibilities....
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Hi Tony This is beautiful i`ve read it over and over. Here goes my
interpretation :-), I don`t think it is the love of a woman its
about finding the love of god slowly but surely
it i feels like travelling through time to me
somehow.... very spiritual thought provoking
i loved this.... hugs Debs xo
Thanx DEBS!!....... you nailed it girlfriend.......... every single word of your comment was spot on.......... this is the kind of comment that keeps a person moving forward with their poetic endeavors..,,,.... and I am so humbled by your interest in my stuff.......... and I thank you........ truly........ sweet pretest......... Love to you and yours!!......... your friend and admirer......... smiles.........T xo
Hi, my hero, Tony,
A ripple in time, could save thine. Ride that ripple as it swells to an over pouring wave, taking you to the Emerald Way, where the two of you can disappear and share what few ever attain. For, your soulmate, has given you the combination to her heart. Open her treasure chest, and bask in her warmth forever.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
Hey LARRY!!.....I can see how you might interpret this that way.......... but the inspiration for this was the "Universal Love" that is within the fabric of time.........a part of the soul of a man......... on it's journey through evolutions unfathomable grace...........I feel it's Love when I practice advanced meditation techniques which allow you moments out of your own body........ and in those moments you can feel the Love that you feel when you kiss someone you Love...........I call it "seeking"........... the magnetic force that draws me to understand the universe and all of its mystery.............. but the cool thing is......... poetry is open to each readers interpretation........... and I love to see your ink on my page brother!!.........thanx so much for this my friend............. your cyber-friend and admirer..........T xo