Poem -
" A RIVER ALIVE "
Drip, trickle, flow,
Over rocks,
Sand,
Fish, trickle, flow,
With,
The shifting
sand......
Rolling,
Pacing along,
Current
Pushing sticks,
Jumps,
A joyful fish
Rolling,
Pacing along.....
Gushing,
Roaring faster,
With the ripping
Walls,
Tearing to bits,
A rolling log......
Sailing,
O'er,
The falls,
SPLASH!!
Into,
Drip,
Trickle,
Flow...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Comments
This piece is just so imaginative, I love it. I feel like I'm actually floating along a river....:)
Thanx ADAM!!........I truly appreciate your catching the intent.........VERY much........ those are the kinds of comments that keep me trying different styles and formatting!!............ peace bro!!..........T xo
Hey t a cool piece of writing. Your words flow like a sream.very creative bro. Cheers to ya rock
Thanx ROCK!!.... been working hard on some new formatting styles...........thanx for this bro!!......... Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
HI Tony .......This poem is lovely, as everyone has said the formatting enhances it ,making you feel your
on a river meandering on its course.
Really enjoyed
love Debs xo
Thanx DEBS!!........I appreciate it!!........ just been working some new formatting of some old stuff........ having fun (smiles)..........thanx for this girlfriend!!........... smiles..........T xo
I like this poem and your setting out,
X10000000 etc etc this really is what I like
in poetry creative beautiful poetry.
Best wishes Jai :)
Thanx JAI MASTERS!!......... couldn't ask for a better comment!!......... Love to you brother poet!!......... peace............T xo