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A Scatter of Moments

A Scatter of Moments

She was far more than a scatter of moments
a series of
breath-taking dreams ..
Part familiar
yet somehow remaining distant and torn
along the line
of some fucking invisible seam ..
She was stillness and silent, a sparkle a glint ..
She was the scent
of wild flowers, of rivers and streams ..
Yes indeed,
she was a scatter of moments, a calm soothing
balm on a hot summer day
She was a lover
a stranger an enigma a friend ..
She was wholesome, yet broken, a cool mist
and a promise
at the end of a very long day ..
Yes, my love was more than a scatter of moments by far ..

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Gwendoline

You at your finest here Neville...wow wow wow. A truly sumptuous read. Pristine in its poetic delivery. Sensing traces of her, yet not having her in your life. Attentive love through separation. Undeniably stunning in every word penned. To see her through your eyes is a glorious treat to behold. Totally being pinned for future readsΒ 
Gwen x :)

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Neville

I am honoured that you think so highly of my scribbled words Gwen .. I can feel my self blushing on their behalf ...........Β  Neville :) x

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Neville

thank you so much Greg :)

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Marion

Hold tight to the dream Nev...which you have written about so beautifully...personally...I have alwaysΒ  found reality to be the greater illusion but thatΒ  might be because I'mΒ  just a grumpy pessimistic old so and so lol...x

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Neville

He's trying M, but his grasp on reality is slipping away faster than a tiger on Vaseline ............................................. always happy to see you here thoughΒ :) x

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Marion

Hey...I'm the lioness on the other tub...can you see me ?Β 
Don't worry...losing your grip can be more fun that a bouncy castle at a kids party Nev, just let go and enjoy the ride it's surprising how liberating it is. PS...always nice to see you here ...I'm waving πŸ˜ƒπŸ€©πŸ˜†

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Neville

Make me smile why dont'cha .. ta M .. he luvs ya like a fat kid luvs cake :) x

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Marion

Ha ha ha...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜†

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