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A storm is a’brewin’ 🌑

A storm is a’brewin’ 🌑

I sensed there was a storm a’ brewin’ in the midnight air

A momentary chilliness suddenly materialised from out of nowhere

I sat as static electricity stood up my hair

It was as if balloons had been rubbed causing an electrostatic energy, I swear..

So I watched as those first drops of rain dripped from that sky

One fell on my brow and it welled up my eye

And I looked at the ground that had been so dry

When it ran like a river in minutes, Oh me Oh my..

The colour of the night sky was difficult to see

Though that black looked  blacker than ever to me

Jet gemstone and ebony

Just like a desperate, depressive melancholy…

 

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Jill Tait

Haha its just started here lol storm is strange xx❤️🌑🌹

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Greg Etsell

I hate storms at night can never sleep thunder lightning 

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Jill Tait

Well I feel lol all charged up n its the storm a brewin’s fault 🤣🤣🤣🌹❤️🌹

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Greg Etsell

well that good i dont mind 
in the day time not late night 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

RUN!......nice write JILL!...........................................................lad

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Jill Tait

Ay theres definitely a storm a’brewin’ 🤣🌹🌑❤️ 

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Shaun Cronick

Jill you had me on me on the word storm and so neatly and nicely done.
For you clearly know what's it like to view one form and release and respectfully expressed in your wonderful nature at work poem.
Full honours and once again respectfully given and see and read you soon.
The catch up kid or the forever catch up kid.🤣
See you soon on the poetry flipside and when summer's here also thunder storms are in the lurch too.
Bring them on!❤️

 

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Jill Tait

Awwww u r such a ⭐️My catchup kid stay safe lad 🌹❤️🌹

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Shaun Cronick

Jill, the good news my friend is I'll soon have two weeks off to really catch up on yours and others.
Just don't want you to feel like you're out of the loop, just trying to cover a lot of ground in such short time.
Thanks Jill and just read and commented on good Greg's superb and deserving poem homage towards you.
Beautiful.❤️

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Jill Tait

Awwww dont worry be happy xx❤️🌹❤️

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