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A Trapped Soul

A Trapped Soul

 
 
A mind without hope is boxed in darkness.
 
The heart that does not forgive becomes stone.

The eyes fixed on negativity have no vision.

A slashing tongue renders no peace.

Savoring bitterness tastes no sweetness.

Non empathy sharpens what might have been
tender touch.

Lack of compassion deafens the ears.
 
Hands with arms coiled do not reach.
 
Feet planted in concrete can not venture.
 
Opportunities ignored turn into regret.

Selfishness bares no fruit.
 
Burning bridges left behind leads to isolation.
 
Stomping out the fire of the imagination
paralyzes existence.

Another trapped soul has been imprisoned.
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey CACTUS WOMAN!!....Miss you around here my friend!!......I like what you've done here.....a barrage of powerful declarative statements that have VERY well conceived intent and impact.....MEMORABLE to say the least!!.....tons-O-stars!!.....love it dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo

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Cactus Woman

Thank you Tony for your wonderful comment and such kindness! 
I am very flattered dear friend! 
God bless you poet brother! <3 
 

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Umberto Tosi

Deeply moving, Cactus Woman, inspiring and poetic: each line is a haiku with vivid imagery, 

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Cactus Woman

Thank you daddy! 
I was trying to use all five senses of the body and access many emotions to provide movement to this piece.
You being a great writer giving me such praise is such an honor!
I love your constant encouragement and poetic and insightful comments!
You are soo very wonderful and an amazaing father!
Love you always! <3 <3 <3 <3 
 

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linda wright

intense poetry well written linda j wright

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Cactus Woman

Thank you .
Glad you like it.
Best Wishes to you and yours. :) 

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