Poem -
ACID TEARS
If anger builds
Frustration will pent
Your toxic thoughts
Must find a vent
Tears must fall
Like acid rain
Cleanse your heart
Soothe the pain
Without release
It burns inside
Corrodes your soul
Takes full reside
Either you'll burst
Soaking all around
Or a poisoned mind
And insanity is found
Swallow your pride
Confront your fears
Protect your soul
Shed acid tears..
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Comments
This is cool.
Thank you Alexis
You have a good flow to your writing Zane, some nice lines. It's a familiar style to me and it makes reading a pleasure. A good job, nice subject matter. The title caught my attention, I too wrote one called Acid Tears lol! A vote from me:)
Seriously Rachel my humble apologies I had no idea sorry!
Thank you for the comment anyway
Titles are just titles, you have no need to apologise, I didn't mean anything by that lol! I just meant that it caught my attention. A great job Zane:)
Thank you Rachel
Fantastic write Zane!
I felt every word of this.!..
A huge reason I like this piece is it's curt but well penned manner to deliver a pain held inside and pouring out as it would....acidic tears!
My nomination Zane..loved it and a fave of mine x:)
Thank you Carey
great write congrats x