Poem - 24 January 2016, 18:51

"ACROSS THE WATER"

Tony Taylor

There,
Across the water,
An island.

Where,
Rests my daughter,
In silence.

I,
Miss you my Love,
I pray.

I,
Kiss you my Love
Each day.

I place,
In this bottle,
A note.

Love's trace,
I hope that it,
Will float.

To you,
Across,
The water....

Tony Taylor (April 21, 1980)

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Richard Waters24 January 2016, 18:57

Phenomenal piece. It grabbed my heart and left me emotionally charged.

To convey such feeling in words is a gift.

Hug.

Take care my friend !

Tony Taylor24 January 2016, 23:50

Thank you for the most generous words Sir Richard!!...........with appreciation.............T xo

Richard Waters24 January 2016, 23:53

:) Thank you !!!

Wilford Barker24 January 2016, 19:45

And I believe your love will find its way Sir Tony.. A handful of stars my friend..

Tony Taylor26 January 2016, 16:47

Thank you so much Wilford.........always look forward to your ink on my page brother!!..........smiles........T xo

Bradford24 January 2016, 20:02

Hey t another very beautiful and touching write. I feel your heart in this one big time . Hugs to you bro. 6

Bradford24 January 2016, 20:05

Rock

sparrowsong24 January 2016, 21:36

Hello Tony...

Beautiful write!

I hope your daughter gets it too...

Hugz...

Feathers

Devon La Porte26 January 2016, 17:01

Wow man, this style so different it conveyed your words and the feeling so well. I felt this one along with everyone else who said so, just beautiful. I love the whole message in a bottle it is an awesome idea for a poem too. Allstars and then some....love and hugs.