Poem -

addled mind

addled mind

you're always longing for something, he said.ย 

you're so young,ย 

you don't have to long for it.ย 

i feel so stuck though,ย 

quicksand all around me,ย 

i sink further and furtherย 

into the limitations of my own mind.ย 

it's like,ย 

i'm so afraid of my own failure,ย 

i fail to try at all--

always thinking of what could be,ย 

that's me.ย 

i can feel though,ย 

i'll feel the full range of human emotion

until it ravages me and leaves me hopeless.ย 

my dreams and life are oil and water,ย 

i pour hot wax on the paper airplane that will never float,ย 

stuck in an everlasting planetarium show,ย 

cannot believe it's already winter,ย 

snow as bleached as an Elvis jumpsuit,ย ย 

"there ain't no sunshine when she's gone"

oh my life, oh my lavender colored lips

and powdered nose,ย 

i can't begin to fathom a life in which i'm in control.ย 

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RRG (Rebecca)

Loved your word choices here. Very imaginative. I chuckled at the Elvis Pantsuit lol. Your sigh was actually audible. Well done. Blessings, Rebecca

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Deborah Evans

Hi ย Gina ย Marie Your phrasing is superbly choosenย 
with great imagery, A ย write that tells a storyย 
of a young person wanting to succeed but questionsย 
her/his own capabilities and is scared of failingย 
leading to thoughts of negativity, (only my interpretation)
ย I ย relate and remember having this conversation withย 
my son telling him you are youngย 
But "Good things come to he who waits"ย 
A Great pieceย 
Best wishes Debs

ย 

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