" ADULTERY (the inexplicable)..."
![" ADULTERY (the inexplicable)..."](https://cosmofunnel.com/sites/default/files/styles/full/public/2016-01/8398364926.jpg?itok=divhEvx3 "" ADULTERY (the inexplicable)..."")
Sometimes we dance, yearning
Like a God, in pain
Anxious, that the hallowed hour approaching
Blinds us to that which is sacrosanct
Bleeding inside for the anticipated
Angry about that which can't be debated
The preacher has spoken, you're tainted
Everyone knows you've sinned
You've committed adultery, you're painted
You know it was Love, you'd do it again
The inexplicable has somehow occurred
And entirely eaten away your self worth
Amid the timbrels, and retributions resort
A plethora of whisperers, whispering in anger or sport
That which is untamed inside
That feral piece, of the human soul
That rises to the surface in dire times
That argent revelry that can't be controlled
These we must cling too when life is most grave
Or we may not live, to see another Sunday...
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Your writes are intricate tapestries many with either a strong viewpoint, a message or stand for an ideal ! Love where you are coming from ! Makes poetry interesting to all !
Great work again !
Best wishes ! :)
Yay RICHARD!!..........Love this comment brother!!...........the kind of inspiration that keeps me writing!!........lots of appreciation ............thank you !!.............smiles...........T xo
:) Take care !
T can't help but to completely agree with Richard, this write along with many others straight up masterpieces. Man you make cheating sound so good lol thats terrible I shouldn't be joking, couldn't help myself. This unforgivable act today regarded in the eyes of frequent sinners as no big deal, this people give love a bad name putting their lust first. So much I could say but I'll settle for telling how awesome this was great job brother. Smiles.
Hey D!!!........masterpiece?.........I don't know that anyone can write a poetic masterpiece.........but.........I will say this!!..........your comment about the act itself being unforgivable...........and love getting a bad rap because of the perpetuation of this attitude.........is what is truly amazing about this write..........you my friend...........are what's good in this crazy world...........and your response to the write..........is proof positive (to my mind) that there REALLY is something to live and die for in this reality.............thanx so much for this D..............you're a pretty friggin' cool individual...........Love to you brother............T xo
Hi Tony, I am glad that you like my comments even though some of his phrases are difficult to understand, the truth is that I write in English for a casual element and despite the language difficulties I love to write in English.
About what you say of Anubis, anyone who cares and is concerned about the mysteries of death should learn the history of Anubis, I am not a scholar of the Egyptian world, but I've always been interested by all cultures of antiquity.
I knew the possible existence of a third eye when my adolescence readings fell into my hands a work of Thomas Lobsand Rampa, since then do not rule out that possibility, neither affirm nor deny anything, but a third sleepy eye connects us with another dimension and that frees us from the barriers of space and time is a possibility as accurate as the possibility of the existence of the soul.
I really like your way of writing, when I translate, the poem loses a little of its original beauty, but I fully understand what the composition is trying to convey to the reader, I find it all a bit complicated and difficult to understand, but I think that when everything has arisen casually must have some meaning.
That said, commented the poem dedicated to the misunderstanding of adultery
Adultery is a betrayal, and when I say adultery I do not mean a sexual indiscretion, the meat has always been weak and while there is no coercion or corruption of minors, everything is legal between adults, adultery is solved with dialogue or divorce, I personally think that too much everything else.
The couple love requires commitment, but also freedom and freedom is due to tip, free love you master, but not mine, the macho possession ends translating into gender-based violence.
I agree with the author when he says that cling too futile matters without the really serious things in life, we believe nonsense without stopping to think if we will be here to sign next Sunday.
“Cuando se ama se puede perdonar un adulterio, cuando se vive como si no existiera la muerte... se puede morir... como si nunca se hubiera vivido”
A greeting.
Wow LUCAS!!!........a few things my friend............I write a blog on Metaphysics so I actually know A LOT about the third eye...........and Egyptian Mythology, Astral Projection, Premonitions, Sensory deprivation Chambers, Intuition, Telepathy, Telekinesis, and much more.........I'm so happy to meet a fellow seeker...........your comments are greatly appreciated............especially on ALL things Metaphysical.........the write I did on Adultery was for a Poetry contest that I'm entering.........thanx again for everything brother...........and I think your English is pretty dam good my friend...........stay cool............Love and Rockets!!..........T xo