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Adventure Land Attic

I've broken...I've flown through 
the ceiling of my knowledge and abilities,
the ceiling of my everyday life...my patterns...
and created small steps...
small slowly floating step ladders...
floating in an attic, 
towards new born ideas...creative births...
heart awakening sound...dazzling sights...
all creations in this Magical Attic will be
keenly recorded...documented...
and all the magical butterflies...
flying majestically in the attic will be photoed,
studied...
on display to anyone who wishes to see...
My Soul has grown larger...more plentiful...
What wonderful creations have been given birth 
from the Magic Putty of New Ideas...
Creations floating through the air...
from the Fountain of my own soul...
What a joy!
What great luck!
What great blessings, and grace...
perhaps
from the Eternal Source of all creation. 

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Dan...

Reminds me of Flowers in the Attic by V.C. Andrews...

Enjoyed your added magic and creation...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Dan Ferem

Thanks for reading Sparrowsong—Happy you enjoyed—I’ll come by to visit your site soon—best of life to ya!

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

I esp admire the ending line, yay the eternal source of all creation is He. Your muse here floats and soars awesomely and inspiring. Great to read it.

hi I'm a newbie here, Pleez do comment review my newest poem, I like to know poets thoughts, meeting poets.

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