YES!! DAN!!....everything about this piece deserves some kind of recognition!!.......from the clever formatting....to the powerful message it conveys so VERY poetically!!......It's what our forefathers handed to us 'On a silver platter!'.......PINNED for perfection!!......Dream on dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ :Ā )
Thanks Tony my man! I havenāt mentally been moving my mind in a poetry context, and I discovered what a time consuming thing moving is...sheesh what a long drag, but part of life...between playing a bit of music, exercising these 71 yr. old bones so I donāt petrify and blah blah blah poetry got sidelined, but gonna try and immerse and start reading Ā Cosmo again, and your always good read stuff you do, Ā I always learn smthg new after reading...hope your life is going nice...thanks for the kind words dudeš
Wow, Dan exceptional~ and truly relatable poem. Our dream mountain... do we ever reach it? I wonder if/when I get there will I look down and say the view is worth it. Fantastic and thought-provoking write.
Thanks Max, I guess the fun part of a dream now is that it is your dream mountain and not born out of survival like what we have to do sometimes, or what I used to have to do it before I retired so I wouldnāt go homeless... some of that stuff is very similar to a assembly lineā¦ So the dream mountain Is the passion that you have and itās all interpreted individually, Ā but as I get closer to goals that I set that Are usually things and dreams I really like... and if you could write a song about the experience that would be a song you would really likeā¦ And you can have dream mountains in many areas of interestā¦ If you have the timeā¦ Thanks for reading Max, Iāll be diving into some of your stuff upriver sometime
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YES!! DAN!!....everything about this piece deserves some kind of recognition!!.......from the clever formatting....to the powerful message it conveys so VERY poetically!!......It's what our forefathers handed to us 'On a silver platter!'.......PINNED for perfection!!......Dream on dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ :Ā )
Thanks Tony my man! I havenāt mentally been moving my mind in a poetry context, and I discovered what a time consuming thing moving is...sheesh what a long drag, but part of life...between playing a bit of music, exercising these 71 yr. old bones so I donāt petrify and blah blah blah poetry got sidelined, but gonna try and immerse and start reading Ā Cosmo again, and your always good read stuff you do, Ā I always learn smthg new after reading...hope your life is going nice...thanks for the kind words dudeš
Wow, Dan exceptional~ and truly relatable poem. Our dream mountain... do we ever reach it? I wonder if/when I get there will I look down and say the view is worth it. Fantastic and thought-provoking write.
Thanks Max, I guess the fun part of a dream now is that it is your dream mountain and not born out of survival like what we have to do sometimes, or what I used to have to do it before I retired so I wouldnāt go homeless... some of that stuff is very similar to a assembly lineā¦ So the dream mountain Is the passion that you have and itās all interpreted individually, Ā but as I get closer to goals that I set that Are usually things and dreams I really like... and if you could write a song about the experience that would be a song you would really likeā¦ And you can have dream mountains in many areas of interestā¦ If you have the timeā¦ Thanks for reading Max, Iāll be diving into some of your stuff upriver sometime