Poem -
Advice
I am not good at giving advice because I want you to listen to me,
I am not good at it because I want to be good at it
I have good advice to give because I have been where you are going.
I have been in your shoes before you knew the size
I walked in those shoes before you even knew where you were going
and I hope you don't take the same roads I have been down.
I give the advice I give because I don't ever want you
to shed the same tears that I have cried.
I don't want you to feel the pain that I have felt.
I want to see you with the smile that I am finding now.
I give good advice because I want you
to make the decisions that I SHOULD have
and I help you because I want you to help me.
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Hey Alanna,
When one hand washes the other, communication shared between the two,uniformly becomes mutually acceptable by the both.....Great Advice..
Jim
Jim,
I love your comments. Thank you for taking the time to read my thoughts. Very much appreciated!
Alanna
Hello Alanna,
You are so welcome and your poems are dlivered with an abundance of Substance and energy...By the way is that Gainsville Florida, I have several friends that teach at the University of Gainsville Shands...
Take Care,
Jim
Gainesville, Georgia.
The less popular and almost unheard of one lol. Just moved here after my discharge from the Navy.
Just wondering, i stay a little ways from Gainesville here in Florida, how did you enjoy the navy, i was in the Army there at Fort Stewart Georgia for about (2) years...Very nice state, i enjoyed my time there...
Take Care,
Jimmy
Navy was pretty cool, spent my time out in Japan. Which was also a cool place to stay but I enjoy being back in the states.
Take Care as well,
Alanna
Welcome back, was slated to go to Germany and Korea several times but placed in a request to remain state side each instance and they approved it each time i submitted it....Pretty sure i missed out on some neat things for not going to either...
With regards,
Jim