Poem -
Ageless love
Teeth are falling
Vision is dimming
Energy is fainting
Skin is wearing
But heart is still young
Still runs fast
Every time i hug you
Every time you close in
I wake up early
To see you sleeping
You still look gorgeous
Still look beautiful
Much time has passed
But whenever i kiss you
It still tastes delicious
I still feel awesome.
Peaceful as nothing
It feels with you
Naughty as ever
I am when with you
Valentine day!
I never celebrate
For me loving you
Is my habit.
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Comments
Nice, IMO S1 stands out non it's own very well, tho I reckon to help flow you could drop the 'are' and the 'is' from each line...enjoyed this :)
Thanks twisted angel for beautiful comment and worthy suggestion
Age next to the person that love is the highest aspiration of all people and that a compromise, a little luck and lots of love requires.
It takes reason Vikas, teeth, hair fall and lost strength and vigor, but some hearts remain eternally young and full of innocence.
Over time people can be converted into crazed hate demons or Angels of love.
A greeting.
Thanks lucas
Thanks dwayne. Greetings to you too :)