Poem -
A.L.I.E.N.S. Challenge!
Like 5 Pin it 0Twixt white whisper and blue,
I roam your spherule in wonder,
Curious of all of you,
In view throughout yonder.I travel celestial heights,
Since the dawn of time,
I have watched you in joy and plight,
You intrigue my open mind.I never understood the slavery,
The wars in which you create,
Yet astounded by your bravery,
My world does not equate.I hear your cries and laughter,
Curious by your sorrow and pain,
Will there be for you an ever after?
It's hard to ascertain.Hi all, this is an open challenge to write a verse on "Alien" ?
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Great new topic to write about. My mate has already challenged me with a few other out of this world topics. If I get to I'll try this out.Β
Excellently written from alien point of view. You are a brilliant poem writer ?
Aww thank you look forward to reading them.
Wow, a grand tag and a topic that is uncommon. am looking forward to the challenge!
Thank you Lisa.Β Look forward to reading it.
Brilliant write!! ??
Thank you Marion your support means everything.
Brilliant!! Iβm tired so canβt this tonight late in the UK xxxβ€οΈ?β€οΈ
Thanks Jill and I know I'm in the UK too lol ?
My Dear Simon,
Wow, as you read, I responded to your challenge, before ingesting this lovely work of yours.Β You have given your readers an amazing perspective of how the Aliens look down on us.Β I think it's a brilliant way, to portray what an extraterrestrial is feeling.Β Far out, my gifted friend.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you so much! I shall be responding to your beautiful place challenge shortly! Been taking a break lol.