Malice
He's disinterested, arrested in his own needs in excess. He drives down your self, your views and spews swill, you're reckless!
He needs your touch so much he'll nurture your love for him in gratitude. You dare to care for others affairs, you have nothing but ignorance and attitude!
Silhouette, regret stained, restrained for what it's worth. Your succumbed, numbed to others approach in hopes of a rebirth.
He pulls your strings and sings a chorus for all to sway, he takes your all like a bitter pill before you fall by the end of play.
He has a sinister smile all the while playing victim to your tirades. A clenched fist amidst tarnished pleas in night shade.
Hopes of angst, romance of a malefic kind, regret, yet sorrow, forever kind.
Unable to shake, forsake the monster he always was, always is, always will be.
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Excellent work Simon. This flows beautifully.
Hi Ian, thank you so much. I tried writing it on here freestyle to try and flex my writing brain. It's been a while so thank you for your kind words of support.
Your writing brain flexes like a bamboo in the forests of Japan.
Really, this is a great piece, Simon. “A clenched fist amidst tarnished pleas in night shade.”
One can feel the fist of this monster like a nightmare.
Good to have you back Simon.
Bernadete.
Thank you. Again this is one of freestyle in a way. I tried to pour onto paper what it must be like to live with someone who is in control, a bit of a narcissist. I like to try different styles and I am glad you liked it.
I love the feel of narration that runs through this... clever. It really works. I am so sorry I have missed your work. So glad I found it now to read x