Poem -
All This Love; by Debarge
Listening to 'All this Love' by Debarge
bringing back the memories of one
night in a nightclub at one o'clock AM
slow dancing with this young lady
who kept saying 'I can dance all night'
speaking with her Caribbean accent
we were both covered in sweat
moving in time to the beat of the song
my dick grinding against her pelvis
in the middle of the dance hall
everyone around was oblivious to us
except my cousin;
She just stood looking at us grinding away
like we were putting on a show for her
as the song kept going
I thought it was the best song ever
I always remember that night
listening to this song
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music is amazing, Flower; I shall dedicate this one to thee, lol....I just went on Youtube looking for Garth Brooks; the dance, and ran into this song; All This Love, been listening to it for the the last 20 minutes repeating, I was actually dancing to it as well; not a pretty sight, lol.... waiting for my useless phone to charge up, love this song, and yes I remember the nightclub that night in the caribbean, hot as hell, sweating and just having an amazing time that night....yeah great memories cheers, pal
Love the beat man, good write for sure. Excellent read. I am glad I stumbled upon this site!!
Lily Mae, thank you for your extraordinary comment, yes it seems that I have led an exciting life, glad you liked the write; I was dancing while listening to it last night, then I stopped and reflected for a moment, then I was dancing like a dancing fool again....love that freaking song; here are my favourite lines;
'say you really love me baby.....say you really love me darlin....cause I really love you baby....cause I really love you darlin..."
have a good one, Lily Mae; I have to get up and dance again....cheers
Randy, thanks man, and I got to say I'm glad you stumbled upon this site also, you posted some kick arse poems for sure, very cool....cheers
Wassup C!!.........so glad I didn't miss this!!........my room mate is a huge fan!!.........but says they didn't do great albums.........but did some amazing songs..........thanx for sharing this "night in the life" man.......way groovy!!...........bumpin' & grindin'...........smiles..........T xo
cheers T, yeah, I suspect your friend is right about the albums, lol I think I've listened to about two or three of their songs, and when I first heard this one I became a fan of the song more than the group...gawd bro. I can still feel the sweat running down my face and not feeling tired dancing for hours, that was a LONG LONG time ago....ttyl
Hey Cherie, life is strange, I was looking for another song last night on Youtube, but my mind went on this one and as I was listening to it my thoughts were transported back in time to that memory flooding my vision and I was right back into that night saturated with music and movement and sweat, and yes the image of my cousin standing there staring at us without any shame, lol it makes me laugh now but it is kinda sorta weird at the same time, amazing you found that little detail, that was funny....nice story with your best friend and you getting everyone on the dance floor, the dance floor washed in darkness and loud music seemed to be a safe place even for shy folks, lol....glad to bring back some memories, cheers sis