Poem -
Fighting with the Phantoms
Fighting with phantoms
mood swings
shadowy places
cold-eyedย
look away facesย
car hornsย
smoking manholes
screaming laughterย
ย whisperingย
street vendor
theatre in the mind
creepingย
glowing
voices knowing
all my secrets
red carย
engine running
guardian angel-winged
discarded lover
back againย
one street over
front door
desk computerย ย
maybe in a dream
life comes
realย ย
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Hi Christopher,
Wow!ย Talk about Kismet.ย Due to some medical complications with my wife, and me, being computer illiterate, we've had to curtail our time on Cosmo.ย Things are better now, so we're picking up the pace.ย This morning, I had her pull some poetry from my "poetic Soulmates", I need to reconnect with.ย So we saw your "Fighting With The Phantoms", and the video by Maxine Nightingale singing "Right Back Where We Started From".ย Unbelievably, this is one of my favorite songs, and we had just heard it yesterday in the car while driving.ย ย
I guess some things are just meant to be.ย ย
So now, I leave you with my poetic comment.
Are they dreams or a reality
These "Phantoms" that I know
That take me to dark places
Where only dreamers go
Everything is so different there
My friends become my foes
This surreal World I can't explain
Except in reveled prose
Love you,
Larry xxx
hey Larry, so good to hear from you my friend, I don't post a lot on here these days and I'm sorry to hear about you and the wife, thanks for commenting and sending along a poem as well, yeah I like the song, my hockey team plays it after a home win and it got stuck in my head, so I checked it out on youtube, been obsessed with it since, lol, hoping all is well with you now, will make an effort to come on here more in the future, hugs pal and thanks ehย ย
absolutely stunning ink Chris. I am so glad to see your pen in action
thanks so much for saying that my friend, cheers
A well constructed work showing how you manipulate language to express messages and ideas beyond standard craft. You impress with your appreciation of this medium in form or style !
Keep up the great work.
:)
thank you lots for the comment Richard, I hope to be on here more in the future, cheers and have great eveningย
Hey, Chris.
I haven't had the opportunity to read as much as your poetry as I'd like.
However, I'm glad to have gotten in on the ground floor of this stunning write.
I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
Perhaps you'll return the favor and do the same.
Nicely penned, brother.
~Dean Kuch โ โฅ โ
thank you Dean Kuch for reading and making comment, and I will indeed return the favor, looking forward, cheers
My pleasure, Chris.
You're very welcome.
~Deanย :}
I loved the rhythm the imagery the feelings .. awesumm stuff
thanks, pal, I appreciate the comment, I don't post on here much these days, so this means a lot, hope you are wellย
Lovely lines Chris, great write.warm regards.
" look away faces" "whispering"
i loved the imagery the yearning the angst the need for hope the acknowledgementย that life is full of ins and outsย
i loved itย