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HAIKU

HAIKU

Take me as I am

Accept every little flaw 

Or nothing at all

​© 2014 Valerie Lynn

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Tony Taylor

Love it when someone actually sticks to the intended metering of the perfect Haiku......5-7-5.........lovely delivery........and profoundly compelling............coupled with that well chosen pic..........intelligent beauty in this piece..........and powerful use of words.........well done comrade...........smiles.........T xoxox

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you so much Tony!! Your comment made me so happy! Also thank you for recognizing that the haikus I write are 5-7-5 :)

Love,

Val ♥️

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Travis Blair

I agree with Tony on this one!

great write Val!

trav

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Robert De Marshwell

Innocent nature of a fair mind....

"Take me as I am

Accept every little flaw

Or nothing at all"

A perfect piece of work.

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Valerie Lynn

Wow thank you so much Robert!! I appreciate you reading and leaving me the sweet comment! Much Love!!

Val ♥️

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