Poem -
ALL the STARS are a LIE
Pointless shouts out loud
tonight...
Lethargic wisps of cold dead
air
The stars are a lie ...did you
know?
Their light, just leftovers
A left over glow...
Life...Β just a contradiction of
death
Infinity smiles...takes what is
left
Happy to bestow
A momentsΒ rebellion
On the pointless child called
Breath
Marion Price(2020)
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Comments
whoa, Marion, this one seems so out of character compared to your other works, it seems so downtrodden. I love it though it just proves how very talented you are
Hi Lisa..no...i have written loads like this...all in the bowels of Cosmo...lol.Β
I suffer from ...'pointless' a lot though it is interspersed with 'grateful'...depends where my moods take me...thankyou ..hugs π
Straight to the jugular. What a bite! Well done.Β 5 STARS
I'll take that Al..π very pleased with that comment...thankyou my friend π
"The stars are a lie" -- think I know in the sense that lights we see were emitted sometime ago -- this is science ;-)>
As for metaphor only you know ... :))
Science...yes ...the rest Yiyan depends completely on my mood. Sometimes the stars shine...other times...not. thankyou my friend π
I really enjoyed this piece Marion.
I watch a lot of documentaries on the cosmos and the light from the oldest further away stars takes so long to get here that they may no longer exist. You obviously know this already.
A very enjoyable read - Syd xoΒ
Hiya Syd. Yes I also love anything to do with life the universe and everything!! Could watch the stars for hours though it did upset me when I found out that little truth...I liked to think of them as solid ...like the moon...lol...thankyou π