Poem -
ALONE IN THE FOREST
Alone in the forest
So i thought. Among
The trees and rivers
And the streams.
Where i came upon
The monks who
Were praying to
The sacred stone
And the unknown
Light that shined
On the stone.
Alone in the forest
So i thought,Among
The wild flowers, I
Came upon a waterfall
Where i saw a naked
Violinist playing Mozort.
Alone in the forest
So i thought,Along
The stone walls and
To a open field the night
Skies were bright with
Moon and stars
Where the trolls
Did their saced
Dance by the fire.
Alone in the forest.
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Wow...what imagination Greg. I loved this one! X
Thank you Marion
this was the second attempt this time to write this today didn’t turn out too well earlier deleted it and wrote it again
My goodness GREG!!.....this is VERY creative and actually reminds me of something I wrote myself......I love the repetition of the title you placed beautifully......a great read/write my friend......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....rock on brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow thank you Tony
I am so honored that you would like my poem
I don’t know if it’s like any of your poems
thank you so much for reading
Great imagery there Greg ❤️🌹❤️
Thank you Jill
maybe tomorrow I will put on the passion of poetry
really cool write Greg!..................................................Jim
Thank you Jim
Wow Greg! How creative is this! I think this is a gorgeous write with a lot of great imagery. 👍 I love it ❤ x
Thank you Tina
to me it seems like it was a hard to
write but I did it
Anything that is really hard to write ALWAYS turns out to be among a writer's best. Sometimes writers can get lucky but it is often the hard fought for one's that steal the limelight. This poem of yours was really, really worth the effort, it's👌 xx
Well thank you at one time I thought I was going to not write it at all
and was going to give up on it
I first put it on Cosmo two days ago
and didn’t come out the way I wanted it to so I deleted it and waited until the next day it just came to me
That's good. Poems that want to be written will always find a way. It might not be quick, poems are timid things, but they will find a way to climb into your inking eventually x
Will you know as a writer
that all of a sudden an idea comes to you to you and
you got to write it down
from the title all the way to the
whole poem it may take two or three days to do that but it’s fine
once you get it up on Cosmo or wherever you put it up you can change the way you want
👍 x
There is certainly both more poe and more tential here than even Sir Edgar Alan Poe would dare to admit .. In simple terms, this is scarily good Greg ......................................... am so glad I stopped by .. Neville
Thank you Neville
I am very happy you
like it
Greg blimey talk about creatively captivating and being pulled in.
Blooming marvellous writing like that of a dark fairy tale of the Brothers Grimm style and dark quality, a superb read from beginning to end.
And your ending is to die for and that uneasy feeling of a distant inner voice/warning at first faint but getting louder pervades throughout.
Loved it!
Superb Greg!
Thank you for sharing and writing top drawer, engrossing and enthralling poetry.👍👍👍.
Thank you And I’m glad you love this story
I loved reading about it and Writing it
Greg love reading quality and if a dark one that is well write it is bonus.
And back tomorrow to catch up on more of your latest.👍