I once had a thing
about mirrors ..
But lately, they just
disappoint ..
On reflection they
skew and distort me
then portray me
in such a very bad light ..
I want to say something smart. How pretentious. What about this: when you look within there is always work to be done. Be glad of that, that you don't see there's nothing left to achieve. Good oneĀ
I don't think there is anything wrong in wanting to be smart .. I guess it depends on how the term smart is perceived and or defined ..
and pretentious is such a pretty word and when used both correctly and in context, it can sting like a slap across the fizog .. I very much like your when you look within, there is always work to be doneĀ which sits comfortably within the framework of Kongo Zen the path I try to follow ..Ā
Many thanks for stopping by and considering my little scribble .. and for the smart review note you kindly left behind .. Cheers Rory .. Kindest Regards & All Good Things,
Comments
Hi NevilleĀ
I suggest you change the light to a more favorable palletĀ
the mirror and the subject are just fineĀ
Lorna xx
On reflection, I guess it depends on which way you look at it .. Your mirrors will be very happy one's I'm sure xx
I want to say something smart. How pretentious. What about this: when you look within there is always work to be done. Be glad of that, that you don't see there's nothing left to achieve. Good oneĀ
I don't think there is anything wrong in wanting to be smart .. I guess it depends on how the term smart is perceived and or defined ..
and pretentious is such a pretty word and when used both correctly and in context, it can sting like a slap across the fizog .. I very much like your when you look within, there is always work to be doneĀ which sits comfortably within the framework of Kongo Zen the path I try to follow ..Ā
Many thanks for stopping by and considering my little scribble .. and for the smart review note you kindly left behind .. Cheers Rory .. Kindest Regards & All Good Things,
NevilleĀ
Hello Neville...
Seeing ourselves older...
That's an achievement in itself...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
An interesting and largely shared perspective .. thank you for calling .. NevilleĀ
Hahaha... I have the same problems with my mirrors at the moment!Ā LolĀ
Love this poem.,Ā it did make me smile. Take heart that mirrors are not what they seem... we see what we think we see. It's all in our mind x
Thank you for coming to view my little scribble Tina .. and don't be so hard on yourself .. I am sure those mirrors of yours have warped minds .. x
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and girls just want to have fun .. x
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and why not, boys do too x