"AMAZEMENT" the loud, in her quiet....

The cause of so much amazement, may appear to be quite grand
As if a careful wife had stretched out her loving hand
On a nearer view, it seemed too consistent with her many faces
I had been noticing her fragrance in the strangest of places
On the wings of a gull passing by, in the hall as a stranger passed by
In the churches the candles alight, sang of her beauty inside
And I stand here gawking and feeling fortunate just to have noticed
The sky had a bird, that brought me the word, love as previously promised
She's like a liquid sun that doesn't burn, but gives only loving caresses
And smells of the oranges and yellows of her shining impressions
I have been transported in this moment of rough recognition
To the place I believed no longer existed in love's tradition
And thank God for the bird that whispered the word in my ear
Of the sacred consistency and the foundations made clear
Through the unseen angels that allowed me to see
That it was God that brought her to me
And I was his puppet providing
The loud that she needed
In her quiet......
Tony Taylor (Chicago)

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Tony
Ooozing such a high calibre of emotion without the words any dictionary could even try to put together...
This line I must echo
Makes me smile again..
For I know I'm not alone...
Carey hugs x:)
Hi Carey......I really LOVE that you smiled at this.........you're a stellar woman........smiles.........T xx
A fine piece of work T` and Carey has written about the same line that I liked. Well done for a great piece. Love G xx
Georgie!!! love that you're here sharing all of this with me sister girl...........smiles to you........and so much more..........T xxx
Dearest Tony this is so beautiful !
Through the unseen angels that allowed me to see
That it was God that brought her to me
how precious this realization is and the reality of purpose in this is your qualities complimenting all she is in her quiet. How perfectly beautiful this poem shares your love for her as God given ! Perfectly shared from your heart to hers ! You are so inspired .....love is amazing when God has arranged it for two very dear souls. I am exceedingly happy for you:). Xxxooo love to both of you from my heart..your Kate
My dearest Kate.....yours is such a beautiful soul.....I love that you love this........it is a reflection of yourself my dear friend.......I thank you so much for sharing this amazing comment........love you......T xx