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𝒜𝓂𝒷ℯ𝓇 ℳℴℴ𝓃 🥃

Topic Challenge: "Drunk"

𝒜𝓂𝒷ℯ𝓇 ℳℴℴ𝓃 🥃

There I was...intoxicated by her touch 
And as though that weren't enough 
She had such...exquisite hazel eyes 
And much to my surprise my curiosity complied 
Completely captivated calmly calculating sweet lies 
Drunk in love was I...
And this sweet inebriation fed my soul a new sensation
Singing songs of gay elation the flirtation couldn't lie 
In a room so tightly packed I felt twas only she and I 
And what intense infatuation
The lengths to which I'd go to win her love and adoration
But I digress
She wore a silken velvet dress
Skin like creamy caramel and hair that did the rest 
Ruby colored slippers and a certain glow and gleam 
A walk that talked a thousand words and left you restless in a dream 
An intoxicating amber yes my amber moon on rocks 
The drink's on me my mellow beauty 
You can take the shots
 

 

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Gwendoline

The effects of one person from a single glance. The power of chemistry runs through your poem beautifully 

Gwen :)

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Curious Onlooker

Many thanks and much love dear poetess appreciating the feedback. 

C.O

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Being Me

A walk that talked a thousand words and left you restless in a dream 

I love this line, it's brilliant!

Drunk on love, what a wonderful feeling that is x

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Curious Onlooker

I'm thinking of revising this one let me know what you guys think!

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