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An End or Beginning?

An End or Beginning?

Eidolon of faith and promise,
Inked from an unknown scribe,
Words offer belief and solace,
Commonality in the way we describe.

The stories of the one and only,
Such grandeur of meaning and hope,
Bestowed his love and all things holy,
Through church, Vatican and pope.

Majority on principle lead a normal life,
Having hope and ideas of heaven,
Yet the way we live and for the things we strife,
Most of us would be unforgiven.

Such rules that are set in stone,
We ponder our fate within,
An endless list of fools bemoaned,
We would all be tarnished in sin.

Such judgement awaits our battered end,
Is our lord forgiving of most?
Shall we climb the ladder or descend?
We’re all patient before our host!

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Ian William

Awesome work, Simon! Fantastic the whole way through!

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Ebrahim Alkadi

Allah the Almighty will forgive for everyone believes in himΒ and believes that Allah the Almighty has no partner or son and in the Islam the testifying is:Β 
I bear witness that there is no god but Allah the Almighty and I bear witness that Muhammad peace be upon himΒ  is the Messenger of Allah....so deep and important poem.

Best Regards
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Simon Bromley

Thank you so much i was hoping to spark such an interest.Β  Thanks for your comment.

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Simon, I think our faith is the most important thing we cling to in life.Β  We all feel accountability for who we are and what we do...I really believe God put in us the need to feel His presence inside us....to seek where we come from...wanting us to have that yearning.Β  I view this physical life as a brief test, that brings us to the next one that is eternal....This is the time we make mistakes and learn to prepare us for appreciation for the next.Β  I like poems that make me think....This one does that!Β  Great work. xo ;)

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Cherie.Β  I just felt the need to write this because the majority of us technically sin everyday in some way or another.Β  It would be so wonderful to be forgiven because after all we are only human and were constantly learning everyday.Β  Death is inevitable and i truly hope we go to higher place.Β  This cant be all there is, i struggle to cope with that theory and so choose not to believe that.Β  Thanks for your wonderful support.

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