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An Unkind Brittle Mind

An Unkind Brittle Mind

Do you protect your glass soul
By being unkind to all ?

Is attack really the best form of defence 
Think about it , Does it make any sense ?

You know you are brittle
Puff and bluff to appear big

- When in reality you have a fragile middle ...

What is the wrong in being kind
It may even help your brittle mind 

- Spiky shell inadequate cover for soft centre .
 

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Marion

Hi Chris 8 have found that the people who criticise and bully others are themselves really insecure in their own abilities...good write 🌻

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Chris Bond

Good evening Marion and apologies for not thanking you sooner for taking the time to read and your kind feedback , Hoping a fine poet is keeping well and warm wishes , Chris :) X

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Gwendoline

Chris I loved reading this 
your final line was perfect 👌 
“Spiky shell inadequate cover for soft centre”
A great write x

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Chris Bond

Good evening Gwen and I must apologise for not thanking you for the kind words earlier ! I'm glad you enjoyed and hoping your poems are flowing so far in 2022 , Warm wishes always , Chris :) X

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Pratibha Savani

Happy new year Chris! A brilliant write on the topic. Wow. Agree with Gwen thise lines are awesome 💜💜💜😁

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Chris Bond

Good evening and hoping 2022 is being kind to Pratibha and your poetry is still flowing ! Thank you for the kind words and I'm so glad you enjoyed , Warm wishes always xx

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Being Me

Hi Chris, an interesting write✍  I think those who are kind have a stronger outer ... they don't always feel it but its true x

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Chris Bond

Good evening and thank you for the kind words Tina , Hoping 2022 is being kind to you so far and warm wishes , Chris :) X

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