Poem -
And All Before Our Awakening
Did you hear me
just then
check my breath ..
Just to see
if you were still
breathing ..
And did you see,
the corners
of my lips move
due north ..
Before forming
twin arches
and the broadest
of smiles ..
No of course not,
my darling ..
But I assure you,
they did
marry and match
those subtle
shaped brows
of yours,
while you were
obviously
dreaming my love ..
So did you by
any chance feel
my pulse and my
heart both
racing, to be first
to greet you
come morning ..
Again not,
I fear, so where
were you
then my dear ..
And pray whose
gentle
eyelash flutter
did wake us both
from our so
very deep slumber ..
On the occasion
of this,
our first truly
shared morning ..
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Kool write here Neville.
Thanks for stopping by my little scribble and wishing it well my friend .. Thank you again Wilfred .. NevilleÂ
damn, you are good, smooth as glass, transparent and true, seems to come easy for you:)
Flattery will get you anything .. Cheque (or check) depending on where you are, is now in the post kind sir .. Very muchly appreciated and then some ..
Kindest of Regards & wishing you the very best of All Good Things,
NevilleÂ
This is a lovely, lovely piece. I feel the love flowing through the words like a silky ribbon lovingly dragged across soft skin x
I am delighted, honoured and humbled that you should regard my little scribble so positively .. thanks a million Tina and truly x
Nev, I have a copy in my hand, or had a copy in my hand for I'm typing this!
And my God !
There's 200 new poems crammed in and will finish tomorrow while pretending to look busy and do some work.
And have read more than a few already and all engaging in content and how you think them up is head spinning and great to see in print.
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For you never disappoint this contented reader.
My Amazon review upped tomorrow evening and that'll be processed by Amazon and poetry fingers crossed should be showing after a few days.
Well done and salutations again, for you always write class and poetry food for thought for ALL readers :)
I really can't thank you enough Shaun .. this news is like a triple win for me and for all those with either mental health concerns, breast cancer and or brain tumours .. For indeed, not only have you provided a free plug here, but your formal Amazon review will hopefully catch the attention of the wider general public and have a corresponding positive impact on actual and potential future sales ..
Thank you thank you Thank you .. Your most appreciative friend Me :)Â