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Hot and scratchy feet

Hot and scratchy feet

I’ve stubbed my toes so many times my big toe nail has a bruise
It’s my own fault and self inflicted tho coz I walk about without shoes
I love being bare-footed especially on the sand
but it becomes abit of a habit coz the feeling is grand
I don’t know how many times I have hurt my feet
I wouldn’t care but I have great big plates of meat

You see my plaffs get hot and bothered
they end up very itchy
So if I wear woolly socks I am always aggravated twitchy
Mind you it gets much worse underneath the hot duvet
I think it’s when I’m overtired and it must be my mindset
Crikey Moses my feet get so hot
I have to jump up out of bed
I’m tearing my hair out coz my dam boiling feet are red

I’m sure there’s nothing wrong with my hot & scratchy feet
It’s just the way I am these days I’m prone to overheat
I end up dipping them in cold water in the middle of the night
After the creeping, crawling irritation
has got me all uptight
Eeh I am my own worst enemy
there’s always something wrong
I am just like a hypochondriac
singing the same old boring song

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A Lonely Journey

Pre-reading Interjection: 
Yes, I see you were 'stuck' for 11 seconds. While that is an eternity to you for writing a poem, most of us write one every 4 months, and then have a cerebral hemmhorage from the stress. I know I do. 
Thank God you're back! We missed you for the minute you left. LOL. 
End of Pre-reading interjection. 
Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Pml teehee but I am stuck!!! I can’t think of anything good!!! ?❤️?❤️

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A Lonely Journey

Jillian! 
It doesn't have to be good! Just has to contain words and punctuation! Look at me, do you think I ever put anything good out there? No...HEY! You'll be fine, you just have to relax for 5 minutes, and 600 poems will pop out. 
Tally ho! 
Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Teehee I wish n your poems r the best actually xxx

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Marion

I was thinking the same...when we were all talking on Jill's other poem...her other self was writing and posting this poem....lol...lol...I'm so.impressed ????

 

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Jill Tait

Teehee my love ❤️❤️❤️

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Gwendoline

Nice to see you weren't gone long. I love having my feet bare too :)  

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A Lonely Journey

I was thinking about writing about my feet, too, but I thought it might be...wait for it...corny! LOL. Kidding, I don't have corns, I don't think. I don't know what they are. Over. M. 

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Greg Etsell

some days that day
comes where you
say where oh where
is my next poem
and it don't come 
then you start worry
am I dryed up help!!!

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Jill Tait

❤️?❤️bothers me if I dry up xxx

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Greg Etsell

ItBothers me too very stressful and that happens

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Being Me

When I saw the title I thought this might be a bit cheesy...but you know what? It wasn't.  You did a good job, Jill x

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Jill Tait

Haha loveit ‘Cheesey’!!!! ❤️?❤️

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