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ANGEL WITHIN

ANGEL WITHIN

The body's shell hides the angel within well...

Did you know that person that was harmed?

Tried to destroy their spirit within?

The angel within looking at its shell...

While it lays dead...

Murdered perhaps?

To kill a body's shell...

Released an angel within...

Watching with the presence of the others...

Do you hear their trumpets and harps?

As you fall?

As the angels rise again...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Richard Waters

Imaginative approach to a profound dramatic write which deals with existence after leaving this mortal coil in a straight-talking manner which can only impress.

Superb construction to this. Love it !

Hug !  :)

Take care !

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

If I never seen...

It would only be a nice thought for sure...

It would be difficult for me to believe...

But, what I have seen...

I can't deny...

It's sad to lose them here...

Selfishly I want them to be here...

When the angels are called...

They have to go...

Thank you for the gift you give...

That gift is you...

Thank you for being there! 

Hug! :) 

Take care too!

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

Exactly! 

Finding your spirit within...

Like a muscle it has to be exercised to become stronger...

We have the ability to tap in...

It takes practice...

It takes time...

It takes the desire to want to know...

If none of my prayers were ever answered I would find it difficult to believe in anything other than me...

Though not every prayer was answered...

People can't explain everything...

As we are similar we are not the same as anyone else...

How things are shown to them it's not shown the same to us...

We are taught by our caregivers, teachers, and even preachers...

The seed of right and wrong we all have...

Things that look good aren't always good...

Things that look bad aren't always bad...

There is always someone in the room smarter than us...

In some cultures they believe that when a person passes away someone open a window so their spirit can be free...

Some people are cut off from any knowledge they believe in witch doctors for certain help...

People can't save your soul...

Some people think that spirit and soul is the same thing...

As children we know things, but if it's not exercised it's forgotten...

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

Hi Sweet sparrowsong,

Few words, but they say so much!  For the body is merely the shell for our soul.  Mortals cry for the body, Angels trumpet the soul!

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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sparrowsong

Hello Larry...

Sometimes people don't remember how they got to the hospital...

Sometimes people don't remember the tragedy or the people in our lives...

I wonder if we remember how we died...

Do you ever get a feeling like something good or something not so good is going to happen before it does?

The abilities to tap into something bigger than us?

If we were body and mind only...

Would we be able to feel something outside of ourselves? 

Then there must be a reason why we have a spirit and a soul?

Thank you for your comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Christopher Correia

wow, sparrowsong, this is a very thoughtful and well conceived bit of poetry here, the reader has his own beliefs on the after life, but I really enjoyed your subtle reasonable approach to the subject, an enjoyable read, my friend,  have great evening  

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Cleo Tomi Ola

Hi sparrowsong, lovely write with a clear message, well delivered. Warm regards. Cheers.

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sparrowsong

Hello Christopher...

You're correct...

 Everyone has their own beliefs...

It's easier to believe the things we see...

Believing in something we can't see...

Trying to understand the messages?

You need to be...

Connectable?

The things you see...

Not everyone can see...

The things I have seen...

Not everyone sees...

Some things you know the...

 Know...

I don't know what happens to people who harm or kill an Angel they set free...

The only experience I have...

When their own mistake was fatal to themselves...

Cancer and heart disease?

The end result remains...

Thank you for your kind comment...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cleo...

It's always nice to hear from you...

Thank you for your comment and continuing support...

Is this part of your journey keeping you busy?

Best wishes!

Cheers

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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