Poem -
another moon in the sky...
the moon is in the sky again
i slept the day away again
so i will spend my nights awake again
what else is there to do?
i have not dreamed…
i have no dreams…
i have forgotten how to dream…
and i am as aimless as I seem…
only short-loved moments
and short-lived friendships
they have all gone on their way
and in my room i still stay
another day goes by
and another moon in the sky
many things i have missed
and i want to be kissed…again
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zZz
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Comments
Love this Zleepy, I have a soft spot for a really structured blank verse. This one definitely has a beat to it. I especially enjoyed this Stanza,
I can relate!! Peace to you my friend. I hope you are ok~
Oh Fish, I'm never ok HAHAHAHAHAHAHA is anyone? Lol. but you know, it is what it is; we can handle it 😜 thanks for reading. Just going through stuff I wrote during my absence from cosmo and it's funny how alot of it still holds up! Lol. The lovely and lonely times and all...damn hahaha
Sounds like the fight I fought for over 55 years, luckily my true love did not forsake me. Hope you will find a way to follow the Moonway across the oceans as I finally found the way out 4 years ago (seen 61 summers now - hmm, still feel like ten or so😂). Keep the faith and words alive, you are takented, for sure
Thanks for your hopeful comment John! I definitely will keep the faith, as we must all. 💜💜💜
I really really like this Zz...there us so much in your write I recognise and I like the simple rhyming structure which add to power ...x
Thank you thank you Marion 💜💜 usually I don't feel better when someone resonates with something I write, because they're not always the happiest of writes lol. And yet I'm also relieved, because someone understands. it's a funny dynamic we share hahaha
I never related to something so much lol I felt a lot of emptiness and loneliness in this write. It's like the only light we let into the windows of our eyes is from that moon we stare every night.
Really loved this one sis <3
Thanks for the love sis..somedays we write about happy things, but most of the time, e le happy kele a?? Lol se you get me. And yet the moon can only shine/reveal so much...the rest is hidden in the shadows 🖤🖤🖤