Poem -
little box room...
(the box collection: no.19)
from this little corner of my room
a room cut to a perfect square box
a room with one door and one window
from this little corner I sat, and wrote...
everything seems so much bigger
everything seems so far away
and I am the one who is smaller
I am the one who is far away
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zZz
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is it obvious i wrote this in lockdown??? XD
inspired by craig hawkins' art series - 'box series'
http://www.craighawkinsart.com/box-series.html
Hi Zleepy, long time no see! Welcome back to the Cosmos. I am a bit short of time right now, but I`ll come back to comment in a few hours time, to express how awesome this write is! Back soon, Max
Hehehe hi Fish! It has been a minute since I've shared on here, daaammmn. I've been writing, but nothing's gone further than my pen and phone memo. I have so much to read up on the cosmo...lol.
oh gosh, okay I'll await your critique. Lol. Thanks for checking this one out <3
Hi Z, I just wanted to say I really bloody enjoyed the introspection in this work. Especially in the second Stanza, I really feel as if it can be applied to reality, it alls about perspective. I haven't heard of Craig Hawkins, really cool art work. Enjoyed Z~
Indeed, it is all about perspective isn't it? And the danger is refusing to see the other side of things. And As big as you think you are, you'll eventually become a speck of dust the further I get away from you...lol
I'm glad you enjoyed this one Fish! Thanks for reading!! 💜💜
Also I've created a whole series inspired by Craig Hawkins box series...I may be slightly obsessed 🤣🤣
really cool poem Linda
Hehehe thanx Linda 💜💜
Stunning write...x
Thanx Marion. Still trying lol 🤣💜
... Very much enjoyed .. and that art work is summat else too :)
Thanks Neville. This write was inspired by that piece. It is a funky one, that's for sure lol 😁💜
Absobloominlutely ....... & you are most welcome 😁 N :)
You, the woman who introduced me to this world of poetry! Your writing pieces are so unique to me, this one definitely captured my mind still in lockdown as well lol
Hope you have been well, it's been way too long haha Miss you sis xx
Awuia, Agnes!! It has been way too long! I'm so glad you're still writing. I was gone for a minute, but shady's back now and on the grind lol. Hope you have been well too sis, but if they just got well now, then I hope they stay that way aye! 😭🤣💜
Aww I'm glad your back suga haha I think we're both on the same page and let's hopefully stay well! This lockdown got me being a fia writer, looking out the window and stuff, kalofae..since when 😂 but either way it's so good to hear from you here 💜💜