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Anti-bullying

Bully,bully,bully please leave me alone i am not out there im not on my own you hate my guts i dont know why im guessing you want me to go bye,bye,bye. I have a family that loves me so. They bought me everything i own. You should be a friend not a bully,maybe make a friend and love him fully. Why do you hate me what did i do. To you i guess im just a peice of goo. When i get older i want a job when you get older you gonna get robbed,but that would be your own fault not mine. You were the one that chose to say sorry but by then i already won the lottery. I have a mansion and kids that i love the most we live in pittsburgh off the east coast. Back in the day you hated me much i dont know why but you knew such thats my story i hope you enjoyed by the time im older i hope im employed!!!

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Ezra Aydin

Good content , but delivery is key; Grammar and restraint from repetitive Vocabulary can improve your Poem, for example: "Bully, Bully, Bully" is too much Ā perhaps 2 instead of 3 and same goes for "Bye, Bye, Bye". Bye Bye do not need commas unlike Bully which is a Title but keep up the work man.

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