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Anticipating Angels

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Here
where I lay
anticipating angels ..

While
you lay there
entertaining them ..

The
milligrams
no longer count for much ..

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Marion

Ooh this one had me thinking. First I thought it was about hallucinogens but on a reread I thought...no...it's about loss and sleep and dreams and whatever gets us through. Mind you I could be wrong on both counts x

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Neville

I like the way you think M .. always have n maybe always will .. thank you & most kindly ............... Your friend, Me :) x

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Tony Taylor

Wow! This is great NEVILLE!!.....the first three lines are still haunting me.....succinctly profound indeed!.....like Marion I was trying to understand the intent of the author.....I came up with an alternative.....the first person is anticipating death....the second is being entertained by 'angels'!!??.....the third is weightlessness!!....just a hypothesis!!....either way....it's one helluva "Food for thought" kinda write/read!!......ALL STARS!!.....ever the pleasure my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Neville

Thank you Tony T .. You really are way too kind my friend, but I am certainly not complaining and like it no end .. L & R reciprocketed :)

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