~ Anticipation's Arrival ~
In the wonder and steady evidence
Of her luminescence
There existsÂ
A marble silence
Where her flame glows
In pristine quietness
The place where I find myself
Swimming
In the sacred waters
Of her calm
The place
Where I'm at home...
Her arms spread wide open
A welcoming buttercup
With a springtime aroma's
Allure,
The calmness
In her infinity,
The universe in her
In her disposition,
The place
Where love's epiphany
Reshapes my soul,
And sails me
Through a lifetime
Of the purity
That her rainbowÂ
Lights up in me,
The Eden
That her kisses promise,
For I know
I have been there
Several lifetimes before
She's my
Mystical reincarnation
And the wholeÂ
Of my spiritÂ
Soars,
At the overwhelming
Anticipation,
Of the day,
She arrives,
On my shore....
Tony Taylor
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Aww I so was lost in your romantics with this lovely write my talented, poetic penfriend⌠Bravo â¤ď¸đâ¤ď¸
Thank you Miss JILL!!......smiles......T xo : )
Blimey, both liked n pinned before anyone can even attempt to spirit her away ......................... wherever the inspiration came from, I would like to order another load sir .. write on ........ Neville :)
Yay!!....thanx NEVILLE!!......and I can say this......she is quickly becoming quite special to me!!.......Big Smiles!!........T xo : )
Awww â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸
Awesome Tony just awesome
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Thank you GREG!!.....sorry for the late reply!!.......smiles......T xo  : )
Youâre welcome Tony
wow Tony! you captured anticipation and romance in this cool write!...........Jim
Thank you tons JIM!!....apologies for the late reply my friend!!.....Lots of love to you and yours!!.......T xo : )
Hello Tony,Â
where do I begin? This is such a stunning poem on the great anticipation of great love. Every line is just elegantly laced with adoration and a spiritual comnection weaves within your lines so beautifully.Â
"That her rainbow lights up
In me,
The Eden
That her kisses promise"
I mean wow, right here is something truly sensual and elegantly expressed. Sheer beauty my friend. Your writing is beyond stunning. How can I not pin this. Your heart is clearly a magical place to be
Perfection đ
Your good and giddy friendÂ
Gwen xÂ
Holy Cow GWEN!!.......that is one of the best comments on one of my poem ever......I don't know what to say except I am most grateful that you took the time to express and highlight much of my intent perfectly.......I am so happy you like it.......especially the lines you pointed out!!.......thanx tons you beautiful soul!!.......Big Smiles!!.......your good friend back at ya!!.....T xo : )