Poem -
Anxiously In Love
I sit here, a beautiful mess.
You seem happy not speaking.
Heart racing, getting anxious.
Going out of my mind.
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I glance, back and forth across the room.
Hoping youβll notice me here.
Canβt concentrate, pressure building within.
You walk pastβ¦.
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You stare back.
Searching for me too.
I hope, reassure myself.
My chest relaxes, calms.
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My heart slows down.
Everything seems sound.
The feeling slides.
Just for a while
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Comments
How I love that line. Β It says so much. A really good poem. Β I've been there in that exact place before so I can relate to this.
Welcome to Cosmo, Graham
Tina x
Thanks Tina,Β
ββββββMy first poem so good to get a comment back.
Unfortuntely this poem is about a guy who is desperately clinging to a love that's slipping through his fingers.
Good writing about it though! It totally helps him!
Thanks again.
Graham
Welcome to the cosmos. impressive first post. well written