Poem -
Aquaplane
Full of momentumย
Intoxicated on summer's sunshineย
No respect for the rainย
I need to stop suddenlyย
Can't do it gently
Slam on the breaksย
And drift eloquently
In slow motion...
I aquaplaneย
Danger in beauty
Beauty in wisdom
Bones fracture brilliantly
Like light in prismsย
No room for logic
Slow motion gliding
Common sense hiding...ย
Cataclysmย
Palace of wisdom?
If I live, leave me bleeding
Sucking moist air
With blood, hair and glass
Wrapped around my face
Whiplash with no headrest
Leave me crippledย
And crumpled...
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Another rusted ruin
At the side of the road to excess...
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Comments
I love the description,ย
Pinned it, great write Syd.ย
Thank you so much for Gerrard. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and I appreciate the pin.
Take careย - Sydย
Dear Syd,
Aquaman is flying
Through the clouds of pouring rain
He swears at thunder's warning
Treats the lightning with disdain
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One day his plane will crumble
And come crashing to the ground
But he begs you not to save him
For in death, such peace will he have found!
Love,
Larry xxx
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Hi Larry, your words are always very good but this time they are exceptional.
Thank you.
Peace and love also xxx
Syd
What a write ?
excess of anything is never good.ย
love the momentum that kept building up till d end. Tragic are accidents undoubtedly ย but a learning lesson to never cross those bounds. Your poem speaks so thickly about how difficult restitution is when tragedies occur.ย
Thats why someone quotes โprevention is better than cureโย
liked it very muchย
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Hi Charu, apologies for my late reply. I'm glad you like my poem. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I agree that excess of anything is never good and that "prevention is better than a cure"
Unfortunately, I struggle with my drinking among other things, but hopefully soon I'll improve.
Take careย - Syd xoย
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Will keep u in my prayers xx
....................... Wow amazing word choice and interesting muse here. I like how this is fast paced and sequenced swell. Poetic throughout and intense ending. Kudos.
soo nice to read from your pen again.
So nice to hear from you again S. I'm really glad enjoyed this piece. I'll head over to your page for a read now.
- Sydย
Simply gorgeous Syd
Thanks so much Lisa