Arms Stronger Than Mine
There you were in the midst of the storm.
Shattered and torn.
There you were in the pouring rain.
Tattered in pain.
Your wings were broken when you wanted to fly.
Your back was burdend when you wanted to try.
I held you in my arms through the storm and rain.
I knew I wasn't the one who would stop the pain.
For a moment I gave you my sweet embrace.
And now your gone without a trace.
You couldn't carry your burdens another day.
God knew there was a better way.
So he took you from the midst of the storm.
He threaded your heart because it was torn.
He gave you his strength because you were tired and worn.
His arms spread over you.
So you could heal and be restored.
Your one of many his arms are for.
Your in the place where love ever shines.
Your in arms stronger than mine.
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Dedicated to my lost love. Lost by me but found by God
Rachel,
This was a very well delivered poem of true feelings, you have surrendered to a loved one, whom has departed this world for a better and new beginning with his creator. I am sure this loved one, is sitting back placing their feelings, thoughts and well wishes on paper, in the presence of God, about you, just as you have done in this poem and they,( just as you), can't wait for the day, too once again, be as one together ,in harmonial unity. A very deep and spiritually contained poem...Great job....
My Condolences,
Jim
Thank you so much I believe Im going see him on the day I go home. this is my favorite poem.
And a favorite one, it should be Rachel!!! You literally poured, your pure heart out in this poem and for all the sad but wonderful reasons, of its intentions....And i am sure, he too, seconds your sentiments of unity, once again, leading to forever...Poem very,"Heart felt" and sympathetically understood, ode to a loved one..Continue to keep your head as high as your value for the loved one, this poem, was manifested for...
Warm Regards,
Jim...
Very touching Rachel well done :)
Thank you so much jason .
beautifull x
Thank you so much for your kind words
WOW.. Okay now this is brilliant. Full of emotion and just held me right to the end. Honest emotion you can tell you experienced this, not only writing on a subject, but that you experienced it.
Blew me away.
Keep writing, great talent.