Arose
Clouds like razors slash across sky,
Β Starkly bleeding is dawn to the eye.
Β Peach warmth touchesΒ azure skin,
Β Contrasting like yang and yin.
Β Darkness draws on the light,
Β From skies cold as a winter's night.
Β Blue as the north winds blow,
Β Huddled in loam the ice roses grow.
Β Shadows shrink, a cowardly retreat,
Β A waning moon bows in defeat.
Β On the ice rose the warmth carries,
Β From tip to root blushing cherries.
Β Leaching color from the wounded sky,
Β On winds soothing as a lullabye.
Β Morning serenades each and every day,
Β Dawn arose from ashes of grey.
Β Hushed in the still of silence,
Β Darkness stalks with restless defiance.
Β Bating to pounce at a sun's streak,
Β Across mellow skies, as light grows weak.
Β A bloom resigned, surrenders,
Β Bowing to dusk's infinite splendors.
Β Fickle moon cold as an icy blight
Β Chills once again the roses white.
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Comments
Wow PD!! This was truly a trip, there was so much description..reading this was like having an out of body experience and the rhyming was SO on point! There was just so much good about this poem, an add to my favorites
Curious Onlooker
thanks CO you just what to say to make a gal blush
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I would KILL to know where that opening line came from!!............Some people have a gift for using words well..........not even many writers have that gift...............you DO my friend!!...........some of the phrases in this piece are SO originally unique that they LEAP from the page..............like........"Huddled in loam the ice roses grow." ~ don't think i'll ever see that line again ~ anywhere..........great piece of work Darkly!!........Love and Rockets!!..............T xo
ps.Β what the hell is "Pin It?" ~ thought I should ask you since you're AOM ~ ttyl.......T xo
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Tony it replaces favorite.
Yes!!......well I kinda figured that...........but .........what I meant was is there like a pin up board or something?...........or did management give you any kind of explanation?..............for the stars and the "Pin It" deal?............also wanted to know what you thought of that comment I left you because that opening line of yours is still driving me crazy!!..............HUGZ!!...........T xo
it goes to your profile favorites.tony
driving you crazy how? lol it is just something I wrote. just talking about a rose in rich soil.
it is a line I made up. it isn't from another author
Very artistic poem