Poem -
As The World Still Weeps...
As a turning world,
Tears spray the earth,
Like a waterfall of death,
Mother nature, sending a curse,
This vessel runs deep,
As the world still weeps.
Drip by drip,
Human by human,
Numbers are building,
When's it time to sleep?
Gather round, gather round,
Dig deep, there's truth to be found!
There's a sleeping beauty in this reality,
Kiss by kiss,
Rose by rose,
No more fruit,
Unleashing no hope!
As the world still weeps,
When's it time to sleep?
Please tell me,
Please!
As the world still weeps,
When's it time to sleep?
When?Β
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Comments
Superb read
Wow! Thank you ?
You packed a whole lot of emotion into one poem, well done!
Favorite part:Β
Wow! Thanks very much, I've been quiet on here lately so this means alot! Thanks for pinpointing a certain part at the beginning, that's where I wanted to get a hold of the reader, if that makes sense ? thanks again ?
If you post something on Cosmofunnel and it has not received a review after a week or two, please send me a message here and I'll take a look. While I cannot read and review every poem published, I will try my best to read the new poems as they are published. Thanks again for sharing your poetry.Β
You are a talented writer!
Fantastic, despair is only natural given the circumstances, powerful write.
Very true, thanks very much ?
Great write! I think, as humans, we have done a lot to make this world weep over the centuries. And now we weep for the dead in the ever rising death toll of Covid 19... The world does indeed still weep x
Exactly! Thanks very much for feeling the intensity and depth of this piece ?