Poem -
Astronaut
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Circling,
Spiralling,
I’m spinning on an axis,
In between the shadows and the stars,
Every day I search for you,
But deep down I know you are far,
I’m lost,
Locked in between time and space,
But everywhere I look,
I see your face,
I see your smile,
In the vastness,
In the abyss,
I’m tortured by your memory,
By your kiss,
As I circle and spiral,
In between the rockets and stars,
I see the earth revolving in the distance,
And I can’t help wondering where you are.
By Sarfraz Ahmed © Copyright 2020
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Comments
Love this. Some great lines. Well written ? I still ain't finished mineÂ
Pratibha,
I just loved writing this, enjoyed it so much...you have till Sunday...
CherieÂ
Thanks so much. I loved writing this wrote it this week. I imagined myself so far way...thanks for your lovely feedback. X:)
I like how you used an astronaut to mean a lost love. How creative! I enjoyed reading the poem. Well done. Thank you for reading and rating my poetry.Â
Katina, thanks for your find words. I love your work. A big fan.
It made me think a bit of David Bowie's 'Space Oddity' song , a great poem conjuring up stunning images with clever lines , A great write Safraz :)
Chris thanks so much! Yes it has got a space oddity feel to it. Full of pathos and longing.Â
The great mystery Sarfraz, where do they go...here one minute gone the next, it's quite shocking when you really think about it, like a toy without a battery...hugs ?