DEATH AT BAY
Something bigger than you and me...
I tried to save you, you rejected everything I was trying to do...
You called me a fool said I didn't know what I was saying...
I tried to keep death at bay...
You claim you know God's way...
You stood up and preached...
I asked are you really sure about this?
You have seen how people stop my tears...
Tears I should cry...
Heartbreak I should feel...
You make me look cold...
You make me look like I just don't care...
When in your heart you knew I really did...
Death is coming quicker than you thought...
You thought you hurt me by things you said...
Are you sure?
I asked one final time...
I tried to keep death at bay...
But, my friend you called it in...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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hi great poem love you xxoo
Hey FEATHERS!!.... the truth only works one way...... and the truth is...... we are born....... and then we die .......and in between we need to prepare to greet our death with some sort of dignity ........I REALLY like the questions and the exclamation points this piece leaves the reader with........fistful-O-stars!!......well done girlfriend..........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo ?✳✴☀
Hello Greg...
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you for your comment and support!
Hugs, Peace and Love
sparrowsong
Hello Tony...
Very true...
I have seen proof of things that could have been changed...
It was up to the person to receive more time....
Some people didn't have to see death when they did and though it may seem I am speaking of suicide I'm not...
They could have simply made a different choice but, they wanted to prove me wrong and them right...
They didn't want to be half right they wouldn't accept being part wrong either...
It's difficult to explain personal experiences, but, we can learn a lot from them...
Some people know what I'm saying and some haven't been shown yet...
Thank you for your comment and support my friend!
Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
" We all have the same beginning (birth), and we all have the same ending ( death) " Mitch Albom,
I think the difference is how we live in between!!
How we prepare D DAY!!
Thanks for sharing
Hugs and kisses
Leah
Hello Leah...
Prepare for D day?
By telling family and friends you love them other than that perhaps a definite choice is made...
I don't know how anyone could prepare for such time...
How we live is definitely important...
Some people say Heaven and Hell doesn't exist...
If that is true then why do some experience God's presence and blessings and others don't here on earth?
I know people in both places and those who have gone to hell, I never said I would see them again...
I just realized that...
WOW!
Thank you for your comment and support!
Hugs and love
sparrowsong
My Dear Sweet Sparrowsong,
.
She tried to keep their death at bay
Such tender words to them she'd say
But too late their hearts were set in stone
Her reward was spoken, "Just leave me alone"
.
She cared so very much for them
That she said, "I refuse now to haw and hem"
But again they eschewed her words of love
And now she sends kisses to them above
.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hello Larry...
Thank you for this wonderful comment...
When they died all I could say was...
God knows I tried...
I really, really tried...
Yes, all I can do is say hello from my heart...
Thank you for your support!
Best wishes and Blessings!
Hugs, Peace and Love
sparrowsong
A lot to think about here
as usual make me think
of life & death
breathe;
evocative poetry.
Luv from Jai:)
Hello Jai...
There things to think about indeed...
We should focus on living and we know we will have a lot of answers on death's clock...
Thank you for your comment and support my friend!
Hugs and Luv
sparrowsong