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Au Naturel

Au Naturel

Does she tell him the truth? or just spare him the pain
for the truth if admitted tonight,
he’ll then  know, and quite likely, she’ll  never again
look the same as she did  at first sight.

Hair  so  lustrous in youth   causes some apprehension
 thank goodness  there’s  help near at hand.
She prepares to deceive and with trusty extensions
goes ahead with the subterfuge planned.

A man she has never yet met … never seen,
but tonight will be ringing her bell,
nerves in tatters she gulps down some hot black caffeine
pats her hair, knows  she’s  fixed  it  quite well

With a last fleeting look at the image she’s made
taken hours to try to perfect,
and she wonders if he also plays this charade
and what style  he will try  to effect.

She looks at the clock as the time’s getting near
and begins to regret saying yes.
Uneasy that maybe she’s just a veneer
perfect hair, perfect make up and dress.

With an action so swift, she removes every length
of the silky,yet not her own mane.
Revitalised now and with a real sense of strength
sets about getting dressed up again

After just a short time making changes  she sees
In the mirror the person that’s  real.
Fingers crossed  when he sees that ,he also agrees
and with luck find that she’ll still appeal

Time is up,she can see  as she opens the door
she’s about to meet with her blind date,
so relieved that like him she is real.. not décor
and admires his own shiny pink  pate!

 

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StevieC

This made me laugh so much! you ladies are such beautiful creatures in your natural states..so pleased that your character reverted to Herself  and discovered that he also had come in his natural state! Great writing as always Lody..you are mistress of so many genres of style!!! 

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lodigiana

Thanks Steviec...so much pressure these days to look our best tat we have sort of forgotten what looking our most natural is!..... just a lighthearted interlude which I am working on something that I am having trouble giving shape to..frustrating!!! thanks so much as always for your support xxx  

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A Lonely Journey

Loki, 
I really enjoy your writing. You're smart, but also a little loopy. 
Great job, as usual. 

Matthew. 

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lodigiana

And that  my friend is THE compliment I have looking for all my life! Thank you my honorary grandson! xx

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A Lonely Journey

Ohhh, you are so welcome, Loki! 
Loopiness is the best trait to have, isn't it? 
I'm loopier than a roller coaster at the Six Flags theme park, and I enjoy it that way. 
Thanks Grammy! 
Can I have ice cream? 

Matthew. 

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lodigiana

Crazies rule hun!!!! now is that with or without sprinkles??? Grammy xx

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lodigiana

Thanks so much hun, I loved the picture too as it just reminded me of the hundreds of hair extensions once used!.. Lodigiana xx

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